FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Zap Cannon 2004-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abusei really really liked that i think that u shud continue now! that wud b so kool YAY! WHE ^_^ |
| Obsidian Sphinx 2004-05-01 ch 1,  | abuseThis is an excellent piece of work. I feel as though you really created a mood that allowed me to feel and think with the characters. Your protrayel of Tyson and Max was wonderful, and I commend your ability as a writer. I've loved all of your stories so far. |
| Mahojin 2003-05-24 ch 1, | abuseAw . . . kawaii ja nai ga?! "Just at the sight of him, Max felt a little taller, a little more full." - This line caught my eye. It's very descriptive and ,as always, very cute. I commend you! That was an all around very cute story. Between you, dew-chan, and Ishshi I always have something to keep me entertained! Keep up the good work! |
| mmmburger 2003-03-30 ch 1, | abuseAnother great fic! You've got such a flair for writing. Your style is great, characters are always in character and I can't exactly say what else, but it all comes together and makes for some fantastic reading material! |
| Dew (too lazy to login) 2003-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww...this is so cute and fluffy - and you know how much I like fluff! Seriously, though, this is a lovely little snippet of an incredibly kawaii relationship, and you portray it so well here. Your descriptions and imagery are as elegant and poetic as always - I could really visualise the entire scene as I was reading. And the emotions were so sweet and beautifully expressed. As always, a pleasure to read! |
| sexy yaoi-gal 2003-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseawsome! i loved this! max/tyson 4 ever! |
| Ishshi 2003-03-28 ch 1, | abuse*Collaspses into a gushing pile of goo* How, might I ask, you write fluff so beautifully?! And how, might I ask, is such a wonderful piece of writing, dedicated to me of all people?! It just does not seem right... *flying tackle glomps* However, this one piece alone left me gushing and grinning as I read each paragraph. Honestly, you writing never ceases to amaze me. And no, it was no the "icky" too sweet kind of fluff. It was the nice fluff that makes everyone's day go just a bit brighter. And quite honestly, I adored this fic. Honest to God, I simply adored it. I cannot exactly pin-point which part of this I loved. Maybe it was the characterization, or maybe it was the plot/content. Whatever it was, I felt so *good* after I finished it. This fic actually filled me up with that warm and fuzzy feeling. You truely are an amazing author, and I feel so privledged to not only be your friend, but to have this beautiful piece dedicated to me. *tackle glomps* You are such a wonderful person! I only wish that more people reconized your talent. ^^ Until next time, Ishshi |
| Ghost Martini 2003-03-28 ch 1, | abusecute! I really liked it! |