great story poem

nice story poem

nice chapter

yay! glad it worked out in the end
i particularly liked the subtle shift from 'professor' to 'my professor'
very well done
thanks

This poem has been ridiculously interesting to read. I have enjoyed your take on the lead up to this relationship, and the views of the external watcher. I look forward to reading more of your work.

I really liked this!! dun normally read poems or anything so kinda a new style to me, but I like ur writing!!

aww! cutecute! omg! this is so adorable! heehee:D:D i love severus/harry stories:D and i love this one, too. congrats!
melissa

*is speechless* Did I mention that you should go for professional poet? I mean. . .damn. This is /good/. Its indescribably wonderfully good. *smiles* So far, I've loved reading your work. Keep it up!
Serpent of Light

I've read this story/poem a few times, and each time I like it better and better. It’s poignant and moving, and really I just love it. Thank you for writing.
Linelen

*Raised eye-brows* I don't know about poetry, really, but I like it, and I could tell you have a talent there mate, work on it.
It's really touching.
Cya.
PS: Sorry for not giving a signed review, I'm feeling too lazy to log in, anyway, this IS my author name, you already reviewed my story (yesterday, I think.)

*nod* i feel strangely blessed. wonderful poetry.

This little collection was beautiful. Very well done and thought provoking. Nice work!

Ms. Padfoot

Something this awesome is unreviewable. I am not a poetry person but the strength, power, And TRUTH that flows is almost unbearable to with- stand. The second part is different because the tone of voice is different, Harry in one sounds almost arrogant and Severus sounds tollerant, patient. In part 2 Harry sounds confident and "that's just the way it is". I do not have a word for Severus's sound but this would be so beyond awesome, if Alan Rickman and...? would read it.

Cool. Liked it. More please.

*_* I love these poems! ^_^
These are some of the best things I've found on this site, really. The characterizations of everyone are great and it's all so wonderful and...well, I think you all know that already, ne? ...Gosh, I must sound like a complete idiot. ^^; (I blame the Dr. Pepper.) Anywhoo, I'll just go now. Stuff to write, ya know?

Peace love and happiness,
QUEENSTRATA