Nicee I'm not sure if this is my second comment...hmm the more the mereier anyway but great cahppy UDS!(Update soon)

a really good story with a great portay of the characters, akane happiness for her pet, ranma dislike of it, ryoga feeling for akane, his personia as p-chan, and the confusion of ranma and akane relationship. as for do they hate each other then why do the stay togather.

as for ranma win all the time, something that fanfics tend to go overboard with, is that ranma has lost to ryoga and almost anyone else who showed up with a new techniqe but being the main charcter he had a lot of opportinty to face his theis person again, unlike most of the characters in the book.

Not bad. Your writing style described the scenes and character quite well, and I didn't notice a single irritating grammar mistake. Your characterization of Ryouga was also fairly good, but as a Ryouga fan I suppose I should mention that Ryouga has beaten Ranma before. Regardless, reading this story was pleasant. Good job.