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Caramel13
2009-08-24 . chapter 13
hmm. interesting.
a nice, light read (in the sense that i could happily shove my brain aside and not work to get all the nuances in the plot). didnt really stand out as good or bad, but the epilogue has me curious- it's an interesting idea. and could lead to some amusing plot senarios.

8/10. could use a once-over, some simple typos could be fixed. rest of rating reasoning stated above.

..god my spelling sucks. ignore it, it's currently 1am and i'm lazy. that's my lame excuse, and i'm stickin' to it.
realityfling18
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
love it!XD
ummbo
2009-07-14 . chapter 12
loved the ending. you deserve many more reviews
ummbo
2009-07-14 . chapter 11
I'm glad that there is a cute and happy couple in all this
ummbo
2009-07-14 . chapter 9
Wow. With the closest-person rule, no wonder Harry's messed up. What an original explanation.
ummbo
2009-07-14 . chapter 8
Snape is cute
ummbo
2009-07-14 . chapter 7
Ah. Harry is a god. I didn't appreciate the godliness in the battlefield (not realistic enough for my tastes) but loved it in the bedroom. He reminds me of a vengeful and power-hungry deity.
ummbo
2009-07-14 . chapter 6
Oh wow. Hermione was able to use unforgivables and still come across somewhat idealistic.
ummbo
2009-07-13 . chapter 5
I like how you broke up the flashback scene between the dangerous flirtations. sexy.
ummbo
2009-07-13 . chapter 3
Oh dear, I think I'm in love with Draco. Or maybe Harry. I'd have to think about it. I love how Draco has issues with his identity but I also love how Harry still has that ember of optimism, as shown by his disappointment with the Weasleys. I guess I love them both. Well done.
ummbo
2009-07-13 . chapter 2
wow, this is deliciously dark
Susan, dogwoodfarm@verizon.net
2009-06-03 . chapter 7
I like the way you brake in the story with scenes from the past, it does help fill in the gaps as the story progresses. Very well written too.
Susan, dogwoodfarm@verizon.net
2009-06-03 . chapter 1
Interesting, a dark Harry and Genny doesn't seem to like him very much. A bit ungrateful don't you think?
Tamikolee
2009-05-30 . chapter 13
Brilliant
ILiveInSuffragetteCity
2009-05-25 . chapter 13
Loved it! I think I prefer this to trading spaces, but only just slightly. More Hermione and Snape - weird but I like it. I really like your dark Harry - its really believable. well done!
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