Great Story!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Who were those guys?? I still think Cameron's evil though. I think he's just working for the enemy. There's to many coincidences for it to actually be coincidence.
keep writing!
Ja ne!

Please continue! It's really really good. I want to know what happens next. You did a great job making Cameron seem evil then making Kari think he's innocent. ~*~ Lady Light

first of all i think you improved in this story. the wording is good and the discreption (i think i spelled it rong) is much better in this one then the last. i just have one question how is rini still there if darian is dead? just wondering. great story pleas add a nother chapter soon

OMG. I love this story. I dont like cameron. He is so evi. Write another chapter soon.

i thought you would never update. write another chapter soon. as long as you dont put anyone with my davis it is totally cute. i think daivs is the cutest so cya

i thought you would never update. write another chapter soon. as long as you dont put anyone with my davis it is totally cute. i think daivs is the cutest so cya