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| Maloire 2003-06-19 ch 1,  | abuseok, there are always different points of view... and there are some things in your work that i agree on. here are some things you may want to double check, though: Ragnarock -> Ragnarok What would Odin do to her if she came back? ~it's Odine, Odin is a sort of gf...? |
| Candy 2003-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuselaguna is such a cool character he needs more stuff on him. good story |