That was a nice story...:)

That was so touching! That was really beautiful, I loved it! Almost made me cry!

*crying* That was so beautiful! I loved it even though i'm crying now.I liked the way you described the weather, it helped set the mood for the story. Excellent job! _
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Nice Story.

Just 2 let u know if u listen 2 the episodes where Gohan teaches Videl 2 fly 1 of her quotes are or at least part are "my parents broke up."

I know i know it's your story just wanted 2 let u know since I've read so many stories like that.

Only reason I told u 'cause I like your writing and trust a nice writer like you 2 let everyelse know also.

aw thats so sweet

*sniff* *SOB!* That was touching and sad and beautiful...boo hoo...sniff...

Hey Girl! I got all teary eyed:(! But you did such a awesome job! I loved it! Please continue to write you are a great author! Oh and I am updating my story pretty soon! SO please check it out and review! I love hearing from you

Thank you!

*Just4Smiles*

Wow. this was really sweet. it got me all teary eyed! I really liked it, you did a wonderful job.

super great fic, keep writing on