 shroom 2006-01-07 . chapter 2 i like it
i hope u update soon. |
 hermonine 2005-11-30 . chapter 2Great story. Keep up the good work and update soon! |
 Jinxeh 2005-01-06 . chapter 2Ooh, I love it! Especially Cat's appearance. No , not the bruises and stuff, but the differenty colored eyes and purple hair. How cool! Interesting story! Update soon! |
 Orientalis Draco 2003-12-16 . chapter 2HAHAHA!! I found a story about Snape having a child and he doesn't know that is actually GOOD for once! (does that explain why i'm writing one of those stories?? *mumbling to self*) *sees people staring* Er...just ignore that. Anyways, WRITE SOMEMOREZ!!
~*orientalis draco*~ |
 Hermione30 2003-07-25 . chapter 2Write more! |
 Hermione30 2003-07-25 . chapter 1OH! Snape has a daughter! Write more, and soon! |
 Melody 16 2003-07-25 . chapter 2I like the story it has a good twist to it. I want to reed more. |
 Treeling11 2003-06-16 . chapter 2 hey! i don't rember if i reviewed this one! greatt job! keep it up! |
 epiphanies 2003-06-15 . chapter 1Wow! I started writing a fic about Sev having a fifteen year old daughter he never found out about like a year ago...I wonder where it went? rofl. Oddness. But yes, I like this story. Its cool. :D |
 LaLaTweety 2003-06-15 . chapter 2JuliaBeth,
This fan fic is AWESOME...I dying to see the plot and interactions develop between Cat/Severus. Furthermore, I'd like to see how Hogwart's newest addition adjusts to her new environment, as well as how everyone accepts her. Which house will she be sorted into? How will she deal with her "father" in class? Will people know of her parental connections (I'm assuming not, for the sake of her own safety)? Who will her friends be (which is somewhat determined by her house)? Will there be any romantic entanglements? So far all that is being seen is her anger and resentment at her situation and the father she has never known. It would be nice to further develop and round out her personality (you know, so that she isn't just an angry kid). Also, will Severus' demeanor change at all? Will he develop a soft spot (a spot that has already been shown through the feelings he had for his ex-wife)?
All in all, this is a REALLY great storyline and there are SO many directions you can take with it. I'm just waiting to see where you take it.
LaLaTweety |
 Paris 2003-06-15 . chapter 2Please updade this! Soon!
I love "Snape has kids, and don't know about them" fics ! |
 Lunaria 2003-06-15 . chapter 2Great chapter. I loved Snape's reaction to everything, just great. Can't wait to see what she's like in his class and with the other students. Keep up the good work. |
 Ivy Crane 2003-06-15 . chapter 2This is great! I can't wait to read everyone's reactions to Snape having a daughter! |
 Lunaria 2003-06-14 . chapter 1Sounds interesting so far. I love to read these kinds of fics, its nice to see how other authors handle a similar situation. Let me know when you update. |
 JuliaBeth 2003-03-30 . chapter 1Cat's bad grammar is intentional. She's a fifteen year old American girl and I know very few fifteen year old Americans who always speak with grammically correct English.
Just to clear things up.
JuliaBeth |