it was ok...i guess...i mean i dont really think pyro is that flirty with other girls. i fell for him because he was kinda mysterious ya no? but i like how hes a writer,sexy

Aww . . . did it have to by Mystique?

I really liked this story. One of the only PYRO-GOES-GOOD that I can actually tolerate - and you did it really well. Mad props! Sequel.

Wow. Great fic, excellent, top of the line, market it and sell it. Well, maybe not that,but it is still excellent nonetheless. It's freakin awesome. It'd be cool if ya made a part two too.

Wow, I really liked that. It had Remy in it, too so it was just even cooler. I love Pyro, he's the best. I'm off to read the sequel.

nice spory, i liked it!

I absolutely LOVED this story! I love Pyro the best out of all the mutants so this story rocked! I couldn't find a good pyro fic until i found this story. I'm looking forward to reading the sequels! ^_^ I'm hoping they will be as good as this one ^_~ anywho, awsome story! hopefully ill be able to review ur other ones. bye-ee!

Wow! Wow! I totally enjoyed reading this fic...the next part will have to wait till tomorrow but great job! Oh and no I didn't think you were going to kill John. I read some of the other reviews and being cocky is part of John's personallity...and I love it!

Gambit!?! This story is getting soo good!

Dude! My brother told me to read this story coz it's apparently really great - and he's right! Cool writing, and fab to see someone else taking X fiction seriously :-) Will read more tomorow (coz it's kinda late now) keep up the good work! Helen x

Aw how bittersweet! I really liked it. This was cool. I enjoyed reading this alot. It was amazing. Everyone was in character, great work! I look forward to seeign your work in the future! Later yo, Icy

I cant wait to read the rest!Great!

Three words.
I Envy You.
This is the best Pyro fic I have ever read!! Wow you did such a good job on descriptions and all your characters are very much IC. I can actually imagine them doing so. *_* Wow I found your other part two of this one and so I figured I'd hunt down the first one and I did so and it's really really really awesome!! Keep up your work!

This is a great story! A little confusing, using all the comic characters and the movie characters...and some like Deathstrike a little differently...but it was great!

this is a really good story i liked it.