this is good. it needs a little bit of polishing but i really like it. i'll read more later.

Hi, I just suddenly felt like reading this, but I found out that this is way too much angst for me. Still, I couldn't stop reading. I don't have an acceptable word over your writing yet but you really are a genius! I hope you'll continue this some day, I want to know that Joe will be all right...or better yet, update Physdelic Hollow!

Well, I finally came back to this,(yay!) and finished it. Quite an emotional ride; you have a talent for writing.

Phew! glad that Frank found Joe in time. Very powerful story! i guess what'd happened to Vanessa's death would be in the next part? can't wait for it

Man, you're frighteningly talented! The imagery thoughts and feelings are so compelling.
Keep up the good work!

very powerful stuff you wrote here. I'll be reading the rest of the story.

The song's very fitting. Time now for more light and happy fics, but i'll be back again.

Heya...nice to see you posting here too...now I can go read Seekers I, II and I all over again...:)

Wow. Ok, I need to go read a light, happy fic for now. i'll be back l8er.

Wow. Painful, vivid, dark. Powerfully written. And I still have more to go. I'll be back.

Very intense story. Took me hours to read up till here...So much is happening. And Mina sounds like a wonderful character...Great job!

Wow, great story. I'm slowly reading through this. So far, it looks great. I like how you write the descriptions.

wonderfully written...and very dark...it's a good thing u put up a warning.
good work!

Thanks halo. :)

Well, this is a way LONG story but I hope to have some parts re-written for consumption here. Thanks for the feedback.

:)

Ocean

I love it. This is so well written and planned out, and although the themes are very dark, I think you have dealt with them sensitively. I hope to see more up here soon!
Love Halo_

P.S - If you change your settings to accept anonymous reviews, you'll get more feedback. Otherwise, people are just too lazy to sign in to review. (I'm normally one of them, but this was so good, I just had to review and let you know!)