Ooooooooh, tha was sooooo touching! I loved it!

I love Mirai stories. They're always so sad though... I liked this one a lot.

Mmm. You have the soul of a poet. You have done what great poets strive to do - not only capture the feeling but twist it, make it a new feeling all together. A blend of so many things that words alone rarely are enough to capture the essence... Congrats on this idea, this character depth. You do more in a page than some people do in entire sagas. I enjoyed very much the thoughtful portrayals of all involved. Thank you for sharing this work and also, thank you for the kind review of my own writing. (A Royal Pain) I look forward to reading more of your works as I find time. Take care.

I read this after I read Sad Lullaby, and I keep this up, I'll drown my house. Once again, I found no word/words to describe this story.

Good luck on your present and future stories. I hope you continue to write more stories, because I know I'm not the only one who enjoys your stories.

awww that was soooo nice it was realii well written

Hey this was awesome- I really liked the drama and seriousness put into this event, and I had always been wondering about this as well. You picked a wonderful song for this! I love it!

Very cool. (10)

Very nice. Dramatic. Very touching.

THAT WAS GOOD

Mother and son bonding, final thoughts, always good themes. Keep it up ;-)

Wow...I know I'm female, but I have this new respect for the DBZ women now...I've never felt that before. They were always just sort of second-rate characters, but now they seem like more. Thank you.

*sniffs* really good!

oooooo, lovely . I've never seen the broadway version of lion king, but this song sounds good

That's beautiful. I've never heard that song before; it looks like a nice one. It's lovely to see Chichi's emotions in this story. You have some minor puncuation/grammar errors, although I didn't notice any major spelling ones. The font/size of the lyrics flucuates a bit throughout the story. Poor Mirai Chichi is a very forgotten person, isn't she?

AAWWW! ::is crying:: That was so beautiful! OMG I loved it!