Ooh! What a suspenseful ending!
P.S. what episode did you get your image from?

I looooove this. Love it. :( It's so sad and sweet and perfect. I've been reading for hours now and I have a very real fear that I'll end up going through the third part tonight, too. But I don't want it to end! Your writing is lovely.

this is fantastic can not believe that i have only just found it ;)

More?

Wonderfull_should be much more reviews here. Good written.

You know, I usually never bother to read any fanfiction without skipping passages or directly getting only what I'm looking for. But I had to make an exception, for this one only. This story is way better than any prequel or sequel I have ever read of Peter Pan, and the authors who made them have less reasons to call themselves admirer's of Barrie's work than you have. Maybe they just can't get as emotionally involve as they would like to, as they have to sell what they're writing. As your work is profit-free, you were able to communicate every feeling you and your characters may have felt, without caring for offending the audience. I'm stunned. Trust me, I'm rarely stunned. As a Peter Pan fan, all I have to say, in my badly-written English, is: your story made me fly a little. That's more than enough to make any fairy happy.

i just love your story

I think what hook did to pan is mean,but I understand why it had to be done. Hook will try to be a good dad I think but it will not be easy because what kind of man he is. I do know that hook needs peter he might make him a better man in time. This very good story. For frist time peter will have father. One thing I don't get is why all magic when in real cartoon just being away from neverland make him forget. Like when got wendy's child from future and work with hook some time. Please read my review?

well peter and hook seem to be both twisted and screwed up right now. you can just tell how bad its gonna get when peter finds out what happened. weired hearing him call hook 'daddy' though. peter really is broken now, poor kid.

OMG! I just can’t believe this. I’ve been browsing around the site and bumped into your fic. I think it’s awesome. I’ve never read the Peter Pan novel (of course I’ve seen the moovies, even that old version where Peter was played by a woman). But I was a real, real fan of Fox’s Peter Pan and the Pirates when I bumped into your fic I found myself thinking about that cause my favorite interaction was Hook and Peter’s and my favorite eppy was the one where Hook captured Peter and Neverland started to disappear. Did that chapter inspired you this fic? Anyway I was thinking of that and when I read your introduction thread I just couldn’t believe you watched that show too.

I’ve also noticed you also liked the Billy Jukes character. I loved it a lot in the cartoon and my second favorite eppy was the one Hook captured the twins and they became friends with Billy Jukes.

Your portray of Billy Jukes as a pirate but a kid after all is a great take on his character.

Your fic is just awesome, the portray of Hook and Hook’s change in his feeling towards Peter just leaves me without breath. And those touches of Peter mumbling things at night and Hook being aware of the memory spell on Peter are great ideas.

Peter’s change and his alternate behavior as a kid and as fighter are just amazing.

Great job! And I can’t believe I found another fan of the show that also loved my favorite interaction!

wow you are an excellent writer. I love this story. now i have to read part three and those extra shorts woopee.

This story is wonderful; the writing is really great. My only problem with the tale is the ending. It was a bit anti-climatic for me. I suppose I was expecting it so it disappointed me when it actually happened. If that makes sense...
Still, solid writing. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

I adored this story - the writing style was superb. I could hear Hook's voice in my head and see his expressions in my mind.
The plot was very deft, as well - the multiple personality syndrome quite clever. The transformation of Hook is cleverly done - heart-warming without losing the ruthlessness of his pirate nature.
The ending where Peter begins is life is anew is certainly bittersweet - I love the relationship between Peter and Hook. But the loss of his Pan nature is quite a blow.
All in all, a beautiful work. One of the very few stories in this archive I have read to completion at 2am. [grin]

I thought about the blue spell absorbing everything in the mind earlier, and to see it happen this way was not expected, but not unexpected.

It was a wonderful story, well done.

I liked how you created multiple personality disorder. It's always fun to see such personalities emerge when they will. Another part of the story I enjoyed was the situation between Pan and the Jolly Roger's inability to escape the Fey lands.

I don't know if Hook can really prevent Peter Pan from remembering. Word associated memories aren't going to be easy to repress. Loose tongues and common words aren't going to be stopped.

I like how you keep Hook a relentless pirate.

Nice going.

O my gosh, no wonder you only have 6 reveiws, the ending is the worst ending i have ever read. and i have read a lot of endings. you want a better story? make pan come out of his mind. Peter is like a dead person with no soul; your memories make your soul. if you take that away your a dead walking man. that is what peter is. you have to give back pan. if you don't, you will never write a good story again.