i likw it

it ok

simply great.loved it.!

wow this is another one of those stories that i just somehow managed to overlook and now ive found it and im just like woah how could i have missed such a great story! :) cant wait to read the next two

Great story! Personally I don't think you have plagiated anything since this story and I guess the following two stories has a totally different direction than 'Family Matters: A Day From Hell' (which is also great by the way).

I hope you will continue this story soon.

Good job! I'm looking forward to the rest of the trilogy, could get interesting!

This was great! I need more! Can't wait for a sequel.

great story, Paige is my favorite sister too! cant wait for the sequals!!

Uh, um...*looks awkward*

First off, i too have been doing 'the Falcon thing' (don't laugh!) and reading this fic ever since chapter...three? i think.

Now, first off i'd like to say that this idea is terrific! i mean, you probably spent a lot of time thinking about it. And the fact that the robber called and gave the police one hour to get there, and Paige being...raped? i don't know actually. Hurt basically, and her sister comforting her, and, well, when Darryl carried her out of the club it was just fantastic!



*slaps*

i have been debating with myself whether what you did is plagrism, or just a sheer coincidence (as this fic isn't completely similar to mine). Just so you know, as much as i like the idea and as much as your fic was good, it doesn't deserve to be called original (if you actually read 'Family Matters: A Day From Hell'). Now, since i don't know whether you've read it or not, i won't go as far as to call what you did plagrism. But i would like some comment on the matter.

http://w.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1236105

here's the link to it. Read and judge for yourself (that is, if you haven't read it already). Email me when you're done because i'd like to sort this out with you. I'd hate to think i'm accusing you of something you didn't do.

Sorry if i sound rude or annoying, but i can't sit back and do nothing. No hard feelings. i'd appreciate it if you'd take the time to comment, and not ignore this review.

-Falcon

Sorry to say, I've been doing the Falcon thing...reading a story silently for a long time. Finally, I decided to review! This is an awesome fic and please please please update soon!

Sorry to say, I've been doing the Falcon thing...reading a story silently for a long time. Finally, I decided to review! This is an awesome fic and please please please update soon!

i love the fic! i like the description of 'up there'. update it soon!



Blessed Be

please dont kill phoebe or paige *gets down on her knees and beg* no! not phoebe or paige! lol. ok im done now. i love your fic its so original update it soon.


Blessed Be

keep the chapters coming this is a great story cant wait to read the rest

Great that all i have to say just GREAT!