Very good are you going to finish it. Keep up the good work.

i loved the 1st story, so i really hope that you finish this one

really good! keep going! u two have a lotta talent

Hope you update your story soon:)

Hope you continue this soon. I would like to see what happens next

Good! I liked how Lucy thought of Vincent differently than she ever has before. It's sad, but very realistic. I hope you continue soon!

Good chapter. Now we're getting into the web of messiness that the incident caused, and how it's affecting all the characters' interpersonal relationships. Victoria's desire for Simon not to view her as too much of a "victim" is understandable, but it is obviously going to cause her more grief than not in the long run. And I'm interested to see how things play out with Lucy and her kids. Keep going!

I like it! GOOd job!

you and jordan make a god team. great chapter!

Great chapter can't wait for the next

This is very nice character development. I like the way you've been laying groundwork for future trouble for these characters as they face the trauma of what Kevin did to them. I also like reading about the Camdens in a way that lets me sympathize with them.

When I started reading this, all I could think was, "Uh-oh, babyfic". Lost babies and new babies are way overdone in fanfic, although I admit that even if they weren't, babies are not a topic that interests me much anyway.

Nonetheless, this chapter was about more than just Victoria's current baby and the lost baby in the past. The contrast between the happiness that Victoria had with Simon during their engagement and honeymoon versus the misery Kevin caused her was what salvaged the chapter for me.

I'm looking forward to future, less baby-oriented chapters. ;)

Was that a nightmare or was it real? Poor Tory!

pretty good.

Oh, wow... Only one problem. Weren't Victoria and Bella in the kitchen when she started having thre memories? Then, when she stopped having them, they were in the kitchen... Well, it might work out in the next chapter, because I think I know what will happen, and if it does happen, it would make sense. Good chapter! :)