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Raefele 2006-10-16 . chapter 1
OMG i couldn't help but squel at the ending!XD it's to kawaii!
wai, you're so good at this pairing
Camthalion23 2006-08-04 . chapter 1
this is so cool. I can't wait to read more please update soon.
Jynx'sbox 2005-10-19 . chapter 1
(sniff) That was beautiful! (wails like a baby)
lazy fat kitsune 2005-10-13 . chapter 1
o...nice nice...i like the last few lines most. yeah, being a major freak for impressive last lines. *sweatdrops were heard in the the vicinty of 50 km*
crazy's silly girlie88 2005-02-28 . chapter 1
the semi-buddhist . . . for lack of a better word "thing" . . . at the end was very nice. i liked it. i do believe the ending is a little angsty. "if desire causes suffering, i'll suffer for the rest of my life." that's angsty. but good angsty! g'job.
Rinsita-chan 2005-02-05 . chapter 1
Hi!

This is very good too!

bye

Att. Rinsita-chan
another hiei lover 2004-09-25 . chapter 1
i am really glad that you did not write the lemon, i dont really l like them, but i really liked the ending a lot it was a good ieda making kurama ask hiei to hold him, it was so cute XD! i really liked it, and you will hear from me again, so bye!
PainInTheAssToTypeIn 2004-06-27 . chapter 1
me likey. I WANT A LEMON! *also gets the yellow fruit thrown at her* damn you!
rebekah 2004-04-07 . chapter 1
I really like
Clow Angel 2003-12-07 . chapter 1
oiy. finally found this damn sequel. never knew one was out. *laughs* ^-^
*blinks at ur flashback convo.* I want a lemon too, but hey all's good. ^^
I loved this fic. Awesome works. ^^ I was wondering if u would be so kind as to e-mail me when u write hiei/kurama fics? ^^
Roxy-the-Wolf-Demon 2003-11-26 . chapter 1
OMG! THIS IS SUCH A KAWAII STORY! I STARTED TO CRY WHILE READDING IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE THIS ~~Roxy~~ *adds u & story to faves list~~
R Amythest 2003-11-26 . chapter 1
Aww! My eyes got hot on this one, and for a few moments, my eyes got teary.,.

...and my chest got all warmish.,. at the cute ending.,. ^^

^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

ME LIKEY.
Koori_Yami 2003-11-05 . chapter 1
A beautiful piece! Full of deep emotions, first of depression and sadness, then overwelming love. The ending is a real catcher, it caught me in the story immeditily and made me understand what Kurama would do just to be with Hiei. 'Deserving of Your Love' was also a wonderful peice. It pulled me within in the story, allowing me to feel the great depression and confusion within the Jaganshi. I like the part when he just set the cup on fire. Your voice is strong as is your word choice in this peice. Contiune the good work.
-Koori Yami
Aibyouka 2003-08-22 . chapter 1
Number 1: Kurama would never want to kill himself, and number 2: way to much drama.
dogsruleW 2003-08-21 . chapter 1
Aww, that was so good and cute! ^_^ That is my favorite pairing!
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