Adore the portrayal of mentor and student as they engage. There's a human side of Sark edging through your characterization of him, but not quite poking through, and I love that. In light of his recent scenes, I'd say you're dead on... Another beautiful piece.

Please tell me that's not a one parter, because that was really good! I love how you wrote both Sark and Irina, and I could totally imagine their relationship being like that. I especially love how you explored Sark's insecurities, because we don't really see that side of him on the show.

Great job!

Wow, fascinating look at these two. *Very* intriguing, great job! Hope to see more from you.