As the other reviewers have said, the imagery in this is simply stunning. I bow to your way with words.

You definitely caught the idea of Jarred being gone, and Doom being a new person with a new love and a new life to live.

Heh, and I'm glad I'm not the only one who saw this pairing ^.^

Brilliant!! Very well written with powerful imagery. Well done!!

I really like the way you describe everything.
Where did you get the idea?

NICE! I really like this! Good short story and I really like it, the description short but clear. It's realistic, basically how a tavern may be. Poor Doom, all the suffering. I kinda thought the bit when Sharn came was a little blunt but that's FINE! This is a short story anyway. Great job!

ARG! It's gonna be hard choosing between this and A Handful of Time!!

I think this is one of your best ficcies! The imagery!! @__@ The imagery was wonderful. I could imagine everything you describe very clearly.

I especially loved the tenderness between Doom and Sharn. It's very sweet. And it doesn't necissarily have to be a romantic scene, because Sharn and Doom have known each other for a long time, and they're close friends, so it could be considered a friend comforting a friend.

But that's just my opinion! I actually loved the overall concept of the ficcy!

Grr..I'm gonna hafta think long and hard about which fic to choose! Scars or A Handful of Time..

::scurries off to think::

Luv,
Fuu-channies =3

e...that was nice, i don'r know what to think though. i mean, i know it was very good, and i love the style, but i just don't know! i can not decide between you are the hand ful of time one. ... this will be hard..but i did like your thing though! nice style. i don't think it was up to your normal standed, but i still liked it.
you know, i never thought of Doom and Sgarn, i just think mainly Barda and Sharn, and that is it!! i am about to colapse... uisygfviuyrvnzuy...tyere you go...