hey! it's brezzy610. anyways you are doing a good job on this story, so don't leave it unfinish, got it? or i will just e-mail you again.

Holy crap. This is getting REALLY good. I'm in love with this story. I know that sounds weird, but I don't care. This is one of the greats! Plz update soon.

Ja ne

I have been following this story since its second chapter (or thereabouts, maybe the first), i must say i'm impressed. I do so enjoy Hiei as the main character. I dont think Hes OC at all. Im not much into OC characters NOW, but i still love this story. I actually just reread it. I was thinking about it today and i must say im disappointed that theres no new chapter. Im sure ur busy tho, which is understandable (so am i) but i would like to know what happens next

aw! and it was getting good too. update soon

I like the story, but there is one thing I would like to say about it...
FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT

i love it it rocks my socks so pls update son

Omygosh, I haven't reviewed inso long! YAY!! you updatyed up to the 4th chapter! I think the plot is believab;le, a tad confusing but meh. Is the kokuryuuha somehow related to these two dragonsd? Sounds like the fire one . . .whatever his name was, ya know, the one locked up. Got to go, but ya got abgreat story up, keep writing!

HEya!... Cool Update once again... aside from a few typo-errors here and there... It's great... great plot... hehehe... X told me that u updated ur fic and i literally rushed into ff.net to check it out... haha... Great job...

GANBATTE YO!!

jerz...

It's about time -.-x other than that this chapter showed promise. It really gives a new view of Yukiko. Interesting. It makes one wonder about Yukiko's own sense of self. Does she know what or who she really is? *unreadable smirk* If you update soon maybe I'll comeback to find out. Who am I kidding? I'll be back just to find out but come on can we speed it up a little?

Hey, pretty good. Hiei didn't strike me as being OOC at all.

OOC-ness? None, hun.

Everything in here is well-done, and very adequate. Except for maybe that whole thing about Koorime being small, but that could be accounted for them being female or something. It's your opinion too, though.

Besides that little ramble . . .


Good job!

Excellent, that must definitely be one of the most original and interesting that I have ever read. The speed that the story moves along is sufficient enough to captivate, but won't keep a reader hanging for too long and the characters are definitely pple that I wouldn't mind hanging around with.Kudos and keep up the great work!:)

Heya!
me just read your third chappie... it is new rite? i couldn't have missed it out the previous time i read your fic... hahaha... Anyway, GREAT JOB! i somehow juz love the way u and cher write... all these ideas seem so original, or rather, i don't watch enough Anime to know if its original or not... lolz... but it sounds Sho cool... yea... keep up updating... me will check back often for updates... but don't get too stressed up with all the pressure and JC work okay?... Well, jya ne.

No u cant do this to me...
*CRY*
please update really soon

I loved it! You can write really really REALLY good! Please, write more on it! I must know what happens! You have my upmost and utter attention! ^^ You are one of the few people that make Hiei actually act like Hiei. Yay!