That rocked! It was really good, I hadn't even thought about how the Shikigami felt.

Wow, i think that was pretty damn good... i liked it... especially since i like Tsuzuki's shikigami's...

This fic is just SO well-written! Especially when Touda transforms.

Love this fic! It was so interesting to see how the other Shikigami would have taken Tsuzuki's decision. Maybe Touda won't be so cold anymore? I can see Tsuzuki thanking Touda for trying to do his bidding even though he was against it. Touda would probably just scoff and say he was following orders though. ^^ Anohow, keep up the good work!

Makai

That was an interesting and beautifully written story!

AW! I love this fanfic! It's so deep! I love it! I didn't read much of the manga so i have no idea what Touda and a few of the other Shikigamis look like, but i have a great deal of idea from all the fanfics i read about them. I totally love your description of Touda! He sounded so pained, burdened and lost. I'm so glad in the end he realized that Tzusuki was important to him and he decided to reform in order to become a better Shikigami. This fanfic is great! Please write more!

I thought that was a really original point of view. I'm impressed! I really liked it. ^_^

this is absolutely beautiful! i love the characterizations and the way you portrayed the shikigami, lovely lovely lovely!

This was so incredibly beautiful! Amazing imagery and play of words, and so very thoughtful. Thank you for such a wonderful piece, and hope to see more. =)

awesome story!

AWESOME story I loved reading it

Holy hell...that was good. It's good to finally see a fic focusing on Touda and Tsuzuki's past. You did a damn good job making Touda a realistic, believable character.

I'm saving this in my favourite. Very well done.

aw, that was such a sad story, a real tear-jerker..when i watched the anime i couldn't feel that much pain coming from tsuziki, i only knew he wanted to end it all, but you really really made him out to sound sad and desperate, especially with you making summoning touda to be sorta a deathwish. hehe, hope i'm making sense, think i mumbled along too much

please please update! iwant more

Ok, let me start by saying WOWIE! To say that that was amazing would be a HUGE understatement! I THOUROUGHLY enjoyed reading this fic, and I believe that you portayed everyone's emotions and thought perfectly!! There were a few grammar errors, but other than that I find nothing to complain about. SUPERB job. You should consider writing a book or two. I'm serious. ^_^ You should at least write some more Shiki fics. Thank you for writing such an amazing piece! That fic was a blessing, it really was.