| Reviews for Super Android Eighteen |
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Joe B 2/9/13 . chapter 6 That was so fantastic! |
Joe B 2/9/13 . chapter 4 Interesting! |
Joe B 2/9/13 . chapter 3 Very wonderfully beautiful and deeply satisfying! |
Joe B 2/9/13 . chapter 2 Awesome story so far! |
Joe B 2/9/13 . chapter 1 Very perfect! |
dodoria185 1/17/07 . chapter 6 It's good but it needs an update! Or a sequel. |
choksantos 1/13/07 . chapter 6are you dead? update! dammit! its been 3 years and still no update. you have a great story, dont let it rot by not updating. |
tristan 12/2/06 . chapter 1 well, its certainly is nice and exciting, i hope you write a new seque. |
Acey Dearest 6/17/03 . chapter 6Pshew. Goku's not dead meat! (Though come to think of it it would've been kind of funny if he had been, but then I'm digressing.) A military symbol? Interesting. I always thought Eighteen should be more of a main character in the fics, and you portrayed her pretty nicely. Sincerely, Acey (same girl as last time. I finally posted chapter one of my fic, "Retrospect," about Seventeen. He doesn't get any stronger than he already is in it, but all the same I thought it was good, and I'd like more than one opinion on it- despite what it says, I've got one review.) |
DELETE NOW ACCOUNT NOT IN USE 6/17/03 . chapter 6AH! It's over..? NO! This can't be! Please write the sequel soon! I can't wait! -*-*-*-*-* He, 'bout the Author contest. You know, the one you've sent me? Where can I find the actual pic? A lot of people whom I mailed it too, asked me where to find it. Where can I find it? -*-*-*-*-* Update! |
Acey 6/7/03 . chapter 5 Ack! Don't hurt Goku, Eighteen! He didn't hurt you! Somehow, I doubt Vegeta would cheer anyone on, much less the android that once broke his arm. That's the only unrealistic part I saw. Eighteen with long hair, eh? There is an Eighteen site up called "Juuhachi-gou's Place of Being" (it hasn't been updated in awhile, but you take what you can get), and in some of the fics there, Eighteen's let her hair grow out. Be sure to read them in order. Murderous cliffhanger! Don't do that again! Sincerely, Acey |
lordwhitewolf 6/4/03 . chapter 5 this is good i liike it update soon |
DELETE NOW ACCOUNT NOT IN USE 4/25/03 . chapter 4Ai...she hurt 'em...Bad Juu...UPDATE! |
DELETE NOW ACCOUNT NOT IN USE 4/9/03 . chapter 3He! So that's how it happened...I was beginning to wonder...Anywayz, great chappie Moonraker! I wonder what's going to happen right now... |
lord white wolf 4/4/03 . chapter 1 it' good but how did she get to be super 18 and what does the super competer have to do with it update soon and explan plez |