Its like drinking a really weird cocktail of raw items. Really, some of it is very confusing and out of order. Some places its almost out of character (i.e. vaughn cheating on sydney without any given reason) but I am thinking its because you are giving us pieces of puzzle rather than the whole picture.

Lots of patience required and I have it. If you are willing to finish, that is. :)

Hey! Whoa there was a chapter 16 and I never even knew! lol Great job! i don't understand what's happening still/again, but I still love reading it. Hope you update soon!

Somehow I'm lost between the chapters due to the twists but that's exactly the part I like about! This game between LOVE and HATE! good grieve...that could be an ALIAS episode! And at the end (e.g.) somebody (Syd or Vaughn) would wake up ROTFLOL and realise it was a nightmare... maybe this one is too... who knows? what a story!

Omg thank you so much for updating! I love this story. Great writing, please update soon!

This fic is twisted, and I love it. It's just so out there, but you pull it together so well! I'm so waiting patiently for the next part! Great job!

Good grief. I was SO confused for a while. But I get it! I do! And me likes a lot. Twisted really. But what fun is fiction if not twisted? Can't wait for more!

Hi I have been reading your story it is great, keep it coming. :)

GOOD, I havn't read anything like it. Thin line between love and hate. I like it.

wow! amazing story.

please continue. really good. too good for words. write more. soon.

Ok...I am confusd...Why did Vaughn try to kill Syd? He slept w/ the contact? Why did he go to france?

Ok so I read the part where he shot her and I was like whoa what's going on I don't understand why he would shoot Sydney. Then as I continued to read I realized that it never actually said she was Sydney he just said her name. So I'm assuming that the woman wasn't Sydney, but I just don't know for certain right now. Maybe I'm way off base here. I guess I'll just have to wait for the next update and read it then, right?

this is a great story, i love it! but the last chapter was a little confusing. what exactly is going on with vaughn? otherwise very well written. please continue! (0:

i hope you're going to keep woing with this - i can't wait to see what happens next!

I'm definitely not much of a S/V shipper these days, but you've definitely peaked my interest. Definitely want to know why things never worked out, want to know the details, the whole backstory... will definitely be back to read more. Love the way you wrote the dialogue, too. Natural and honest.