I thought it was excellent. I'm glad yami stopped and is willing to wait for Yugi.

That was sweet and limey! Actually as a younger version Yugi in an upset state like that I would deffo have to agree though other reasons do and will apply. Plus yes its an excellent way of seeing something a little different but just as good! Heaven knows most of us will hav at least on of those moments in our lives :p

How about a continuation of this?

first I want to say that what you said about Yugi is not true becase in the other stories you wrote #17 Pharaoh My Pharaoh there was a Lemon between Yami and(Yugi) and yugi actully let Yami do it to him,but still I aprove of what you said about slowing it down and i'm glad that Yami also aproves of Yugi's thoughts ... !Rock-on!

It was so sweet! You tried to make Yami and Yugi in character, which I really appreciate; enough authors don't do that (myself included). Wonderful story!

That was the most beautiful story i ever read! *gets all teary*

Very good point to give out to people and you still kept the story entertaining. Well done. Keep it up!

kawaii! that was so sweet of Yami to wait like that! :)

i loved it! _

That was good but you need to keep going! I would seriously like something citrusy at the moment. Your friendly reader,

Goddess Chloe

I really liked that ending, it has a really good message. I don't see too many stories that ended like that.

I love this story so much! You are a beautiful writer!

*Squirt, From Finding Nemo* Sweet...

I liked it! It was really sweet, but I got scared when Yami was playing with Yugi's pants button. I'm not much of a Yoi person, but the fic was really good!

*Slaps Malik*

Malik: *Wakes up* what was that for?

me: for falling asleep during a graet fic!

Keep writing those fics, you do a great job!

I liked it

You would *think* that after reading so many of your fics with the same basic idea that I'd get tired of it. You *would* think that, wouldn't you? Is it true? Hell no. *Giggles* And before I turn this review into an ungodly mess of junk I'm just going to end it with this litte note here:

And the six pack (no, i don't mean chest) Bakura had brought hadn't helped any.