good story mythie, you screwed up though (sirius tired to kill peter in brod day light, like a day after their death) and they all found out stuff automatocally, too quicly, but other than that, great ficcie! amazing for a first ficcie! well shutting up, cya!

I have a weakness for angst-type stories.

Good job, that last paragraph was just, full of impact, particularly those last two

sentences.

it is a great story. you should write more. did you know that in Latin Sirius means Dog Star? isnt that awesome? a lot of words and names in harry potter mean awesome things in Latin. Lupin means wolf.

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Ouch, poor Sirius. ::sniffs:: Although the last paragraph was written simply it had the most effect. ::sniffs again:: I love this!

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Hi. Great story. I did read this b4. But I like it a lot. Well. I was chatting kind of with you. And so I reviewed this time. Well. Bye. Of yeah. Great Story again. And I was Clio.

Not bad. The issues and plot are good, although Sirius argued with Hagrid over whether of not he could have Harry (Prisoner of Azkaban), and Hagrid got there first, because he says Srius came up on his motorcycle (Prisoner of Azkaban). There's a few cases of repeating a word twice too close to each other, and the writing and punctuation could use polishing, but I really liked he way you dealt with the issue of the Dark Mark. Not at all bad for a first fic - my first fanfic was much worse (it's hidden in the deepest, darkest depths of my computer). Well done. Keep writing. Oh, and The Lord of The Rings adn Star Wars rule ;-).

That was good! Damn Wormtail... I hate that ass...

Awww...

i liked it, the end is sad, like always in these kind of fics.

Oh, that was great! Sirius is the best, and this really works with the kind of person he seems to be. This was definitely one of the better fan fics I've read. (but then, I havn't read all that many...)

That was a really really good story. You did it really really well. I like! And, I am no longer confused about why Sirius laughed. Thank you! THIs was a GRRRRREAT fic, as Tony the Tiger would say!