I love your story. I do hope that you plan to finish your story at some point though. It would be such a shame to let a story like this that you have poured your heart and soul into to write over 200,0 words to remain unfinished…

I must admit that I am particularly anxious to find out the fates of Cloud, Squall, Sephiroth, and Selan. Also if there is going to be any Yuffie-Zell. And when is Seifer going to show up again? Please don’t let Rikku fall into the hands of Shinra! Seifer’s gotta save the day once again, right?

This story dead?

Or just a really long gap between updates?

Wow! When was the last time i read this story!? Lol! I remember reading last year with AKOS. These two stories are my favorite adventure stories. It has even inspired me to write my adventure cross-over. I just love this story line so much, but it's sad that squall is blind T.T. I hope you haven't dumped this story, it will be a shame if you did. And i wonder if you could mash DoC and CC with it. It would be amazing if you do. I hope ya update soon ^^

you'd better update! you have all this rising action you'd better not discontinue the fic it's too good. okay i've said my piece on that matter.
i wanna know what's going on with rikku and seifer!! and laguna and all that but mainly the first too.
oh so is it gonna be yuffiexSeifer? at this point i'm sure i'd support any pairing you write i just like wondering what the pairings will be.

nice chapter some humorous parts that's good. aww it was cute when seph stood up for quistis.
nice new plot dvlpmnts.
so is it gonna be breexReeve? now that would be something.

poor squall and yes this explains a lot i think i would understand more is i'd seen some of the other ff games but whatever.

wow that thing with those 10 SeeDs was tough but the reactions afterwards were good. great chapter good job with emotion
i knew i didn't like that woman i hope seifer gets there and quick with his new pet loved the name btw lol

“So that’s our mission statement?” Irvine asked in amusement. “We slappeth asses downeth?”--lol


yay cloud he does remember she's not the real thing that's good. he won't be duped the same way twice that's good

good 'number girl's' starting to wake up to the truth

and yeah aerith and squall teamed up can't be good for either one's mental health at least not at first

He had stopped and looked at her appraisingly, and then startlingly smiled warmly. So that was the secret, Aeris realized. Threaten Squall Leonhart with a potentially deadly weapon, and he may even start to like you.--lol true

augh so the iriana story finally comes out okay i do remember a reference from rinoa... or maybe it was squall to a psycho girlfriend

zell calling someone else chicken-wuss? i love it!

squall's place and role will certainly change but things as unexpected as this personaly i love them and poor zell he's so lonely so i'm thinking you might pair zellxTifa it certainly fits but hm i'd like to see how you work that pairing out.
i liked the cloudxSephiroth battle thing it was certainly different but i think i prefer your normal style it still is nice to change things up every once in a while though.

the meeting with zack was... a very new and unexpected twist
good chapter the thing with bahmut was perhaps a little suprising but not shocking. i want to see if there's gonna be anymore from that one gf the one that had went bad began with a t... con't remember it tho.

once again i love this chapter title quite amusing
good chapter i knew that phone call would be important.
now things'll get even more interesting.

Aeris moved a bit closer to the open door, so she could hear better. She was careful to be sure she stayed out of sight, though. Eavesdropping was a very bad habit she had picked up from her days as a Guardian Force. She had every intention of breaking it, but the practice was just too much damn fun. Besides, it was their own fault. They had left the door open after all.--lol

too bad squall missed the talk about why the dark ages had to occur but it still wouldn't make it any easier

good chapter. hopefully they'll meet with avalanche soon that should be interesting

another great chapter. good job.
oh the part with the turks was really good the one oc knows how to arrange these things odine certainly didn't.
oh was the poll for which would confront 'the thing' then?
oh so a third volume may not happen? well that's a little dissapointing but i look forward to the rest of this fic and of course the prequal.

another amazing chapter i love how well you made everything fit together. i'm confused by the golden saucer thing... wait they can contact tifa from there! maybe my early prediction will prove true.
good with the time thing it makes the audience even more tense. these fics would make awesome action movies they certainly have enough to go on but they have more than just action they have a killer plot and a nice mix of things that's what makes them good.

Selphie grinned, “Hey! Can we cause collateral damage?”

Squall, for once in his life, assented to Selphie‘s overly destructive instincts, “We can’t escape detection for long, anyways. Knock yourself out.”

Selphie cheered, “I can’t believe you said that! Booyaka!”-lol i love selphie she's too much

oh good tifa made astounding progress.

they'd better hurry so cloud doesn't die and then hope tifa will fix everything b/c cloud will forget everything abt aeris being fake... prob'ly
amazing chapter. i look forward to the prequal you mentioned as well.

abt the last chapter: cute and it was very interesting learning of gilgamesh's past as well

this chapter:
hojo's experiments yet another plot twist
i'm glad the turks and selan and RUFUS aren't dead! yet another killer plot twist a had to read that a few times and make sure it wasn't in the farther past when he was still 'alive'
Selan needed no second encouragement. He stood behind Sephiros and boomed, “Damnit, boy! I spend all that time and effort filling that pea-brain of yours with tactical knowledge, and you use it to win card games!”--lol
i knew squall was the card master!
good chapter. aeris is finally there. oh i'm excited abt the next part awesome preview.
lol at the chapter title i love the double meaning there