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everyday-snowangel 2008-07-17 ch 18,	abuseaw! that was soo cute! i loved it! it was amazing! ^^
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 18,	abuseThat was a really great epilogue! You're right, a loving, mushy ending just wouldn't have been right. In fact, I think you wrote is perfectly... the nod was a very nice wrap up and it very well established the relationship between them. Reno and Aeris, huh? Well, wouldn't that be interesting? Reno so loud and obnoxious, and Aeris so modest and quiet. The very perfect thing about it would be Sephiroth beating Reno's ** every time he did something stupid. Like I said, great story. It was very well written, it had great descriptions, and the characters were very in tune with the plot. Wonderful job! -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 17,	abuseVincent is finally over his moodiness. Yay for Tifa! Actually, something like that happened with me. I dated this guy who just stopped dating my friend. He was all moody and emotional about it for months, and we began to grow on each other. We started dating, and he got over her. Then I broke up with him for his sibling... aren't I terrible? Great story. I usually don't like the ones that seem more modernized and very different... like Vincent not knowing Cloud, etc. But stories like this make it seem like it was "meant to be"... :) -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 16,	abuseAw... VincentxLucercia-ness is always so sweet. I can't imagine Vincent being in love, but apparently he was. It's so strange... When you're editing a chapter for your story, there's a bar at the top of the box where you save your chapter to. It has the symbols for italics, bold, and underline, along with a few other things, like a divider (which I recommend using instead of these: ~*). :) -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 15,	abuseWow... this was a really short chapter, but at the same time it said a lot about the whole story. Tifa's feelings for Cloud, her growing feelings for Vincent, everything. Well done, you. :) -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 14,	abuseI know how that is... wanting to get a story over with to finish some other things. I have several untouched and unfinished stories that need finishing. I have others that I wrote two years ago and could use some touching up. Oi... it's hectic, isn't it? Fanfictions have to be the universal "hey, me too!" kinda thing. Good chapter, this one. They're getting deeper and deeper. :) -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 13,	abuseThey do look alike, don't they? I've never really noticed that. I always thought Aeris and Zack looked very similar. But you have a point there. But... dun dun dun. Here he comes to wreck the DAY. :) -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 12,	abuseWe know Vincent too well. He'll definitely get outta that... I'm sure you've probably already been told, but you do know that the paragraphs in this chapter are all... squished, right? That can easily be fixed by replacing a chapter. :) -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 11,	abuseWell, well... Cid seems more heroic than Reno does, really. Huh. Rufus is a loser. -stabs with carrot- Die Rufus... -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 10,	abuseYes! That's what I'm talking about! Vincent and Tifa-ness! Whee! Once again... hoorah for battle scenes. :) -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 9,	abuseWell that sucks. Poor Shera. Poor Cid. ...Poor Vincent. I felt like including him. :) -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 8,	abuseAh, poor Shera must be involved? Oh damn... Cid won't be happy... Yes, I see the "mindlessness" going on between Tifa, Reno and Vincent. But it's funny. "Pidheaded" made me giggle a little bit... -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 7,	abusePoor Vinnie... -pokes Sephiroth plushie violently- Reno is so obnoxious. You hafta love'm. Tifa's lucky... getting to take care of Vincent. Damn her. :) Yay for battle scenes! -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 6,	abuseOoh. I spy some lovebugs sneaking into your story. That was kinda cute, actually. It wasn't a bad chapter. Not at all. It was nice. :) (Woot for your 100th review) -Scarlet
Shuiro Mistress 2007-11-22 ch 5,	abuseAw, I wanna cook for Vinnie... That's actually a really funny thought. What kind of food does Vincent like? :/ Wow. Cloud is evil. Holy crap. I can't imagine that, really. I guess now I can though. Sephiroth is uber smexy. I love him and his super awesome hair. This was a pretty long chapter. It looks like they're getting better. :) -Scarlet

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