i cried literly once i started i couldnt stop i love this so much but i didnt like the ending then again thats only me very sad even though i didnt like the end i loved it i love how you ploted this story thanks so much for posting this story

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XiaoQiao24

*surprised* Certainly not an ending I expected - but I love it. Well, actually, Elaine committing suicide herself I expected, but Serena... I expected her to attempt suicide but didn't think that she would actually succeed. And actually, I was a bit curious as to why the queen (Neo-Queen Serenity, I think? Don't remember which queen you said...) told Pluto not to interfere. But now, I'm thinking that perhaps, if Serena got through this, she would be all the more strong and be an even better future queen. But anyway, I really like this fic, especially with the twist. Love how it's a tragedy as well. ^__^

Sorry this is actually for chapter 11 the last chapyer I just wanted to say what a suprising ending. How horible that Ellen, thats her true name, left her son with out a father mother or any siblings.

omg that was so sad
i cant believe usagi-chan comitted suicide, i guess even the strongest of people can break
it was a very heart-breaking story
very emotional
amazing writing

Sorry I didn't havetime to finish it. Maybe I will have a chance in the long run.
Michessiah

Never thought that Serena was capable of killing. She is so sweet and innocent. But one thing is for sure... this certainly was a shocker!

Nicely done. though I would have thought that he... of all people would have known that!!?
Michessiah

A little dramatic don't you think?
Michessiah

That was o.k I should be giving you ratings, but it coul use more detail.

Smoking

Excellent, Keep up the good work.

Well, I'll read more tomorrow but this is a great story to tell. I might ask to borrow it but not all of your material or I could dedicate mine to you. Look me Up.
Michessiah

This is really good so far.
Michessiah.

I can't help but think that this has happened to you.
Michessiah

Listen this is going to come up annomise but i've actually reviewed your story before it's just that i'm not logged in. Hope you get this anyway. Anyway, I didn't know that baby's could feed themselves and that you wer holdind this perticular babay. I'm just kidding love it keep writing.
Michessiah