I know that since you've started this story, things have changed... but you could still continue it. This story has potential, if you would only continue it. Don't leave me with a horrible cliff-hanger that I will always wonder about.

i like it so far. I also like the way you kept to the story and charater lines. If you have finished the story i would be pleased to read it.
Good luck,
Allison

Hey
Don't ever say you lack talent. Don't put words in your reviewers mouth.

Anyway, I think the first chapter has potiential. Of course it's hard to tell. It's so short. I will continue to R&R if you R&R one of mine. I keep my reviewers stories to read first. It seems only fair.

I think Dumbldore is in character, which is hard to do. I also like the way you introduced the child. Looking forward to more.

Please review one of my fics--Somre are very short and some are long--to keep yoour name in front of me.

Lady Lestrange