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2006-05-02
ch 1,
abusehow is that angest?i mean come on thats sheer tragity and romance right there! well exsept for the the thing its on its a really good storie and keep on writeing it! ^__^ yay i did the ,little face thing and again really good storie! update REALY REALY REALY SON!^__^
meheeners
2004-04-13
ch 1,
abuseI'm sure you're getting tired of hearing "Kawaii!" all the time, so I'll just skip that part and leave a long review instead!
Okay, so this is a VERY nicely done fic. I love the nice little warm feeling it leaves when you finish the last word. Although, I was a tad confused when they said they loved each other. I know that you meant that they had a brother/sister kind of love, but you could have made it slightly more clear. Still, all this was very well represented, and you kept in-character pretty well.
Well, I think that's a long enough review...
Become Happy ^_^
Fate
2003-10-06
ch 1, anon.
abusekore wa kawii desu! This is cute! You should definitly write more Van/Merle fics! Email me ok? We can talk.
Jonathan
2003-05-07
ch 1, anon.
abusePlease hurry up with the chapters!! It is good so far but I really do not have a lot of patience so please finish this story. But if you need to take your time to make a good one then do it. I would rather have a good story than a bad one.
Krile
2003-04-14
ch 1,
abuseAw, this is so cute! I love MerlexVan, even though not many people seem to... great story! Keep up the good work!
merlegirl
2003-04-01
ch 1, anon.
abusekawii!I think thats how you spell it? this story is so cute! I love it!
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