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Jayliyah
2005-12-07 . chapter 2
I like this, it's clever and unique. Writing up different and new scenarios for the same situation is definitely original. I think you've pretty much covered the positive and negative aspects of Squall and Rinoa's relationship and what could have happened. Also, the random encounters were hilarious. XD That darn monkey! Keep up the good work!
wellduh...
2005-06-01 . chapter 2
... whu a a a at? Man, this was a refreshing read. *laughs* Keep it up!
lendmemoni
2004-05-02 . chapter 2
When i read the first chapter, i was like WHOA! This is totally different from most stories, and its so good. On the second chapter, i got a little confoosed O_O on the scene A,B,C,D, & E, does it pick off from where it started on the second chapter? But even though i have issues, i really liked this story, you gotta update soon oks? WRITE WRITE WRITE!
magistrate
2004-05-01 . chapter 2
Nomad, you make me laugh. A lot. This makes me happy ^^.
I especially like the permutations of the first paragraph--different while still being similar and lending to a cohesive theme, and all that.
If you don't come out with another chapter of this soon, I'm coming after you. /I know where you live!!/
Riona
2003-10-22 . chapter 1
This is very interesting - it reminds me of the film Lola Rennt. I adore Scenario E. It makes Rinoa seem so much deeper than most people portray her, somehow.
Lk Ivy
2003-07-15 . chapter 1
This is quite interesting. Seems to start out as a parody on overly sweet romances and then grows in realism with each scenario. It's quite refreshing to read something beyond the stereotypes.
Ivy
Saki3
2003-05-23 . chapter 1
Huh! Interesting. I like it ^^ Which do you agree with most, though? I like Scenario A. I think they're a cute couple.
zhakeena
2003-04-01 . chapter 1
This is a good fic. Seems like a recurring dream or summat... Nice.
Keiry
2003-04-01 . chapter 1
What happened to scenario F? No, just kidding. It was good! Real good! I like A, just cause Im a squinoa fan, so there's my imput..
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