Wow... this was just beautiful and very well written. Interesting and ironic how Kagome herself set it all in motion.

Great story!! I loved it!!

Very beautiful and a very strong ending. I expected Kagome to kill Onigumo, but you surprised me! And Kagome gave Naraku his name and the idea to trick Kikyo and Inuyasha. That was a cruel twist, wasn't it? Very sad. I wonder if Kagome will remember...

I can see how Kagome is growing and maturing and gaining an insight into her incarnate's difficult life and the weight of her responsibility.

~Pretty

Ah, I could feel the emotion in this chapter. Kagome's fear and uncertainty with Onigumo. Seeing him like this now and having the choice to prevent all those deaths caused by his future self would truly be a nightmare.

Your writing is lovely, a bit macabre at times (but I like that), and you portray the emotions very well.

I shall continue!

~Pretty

heyz i love ur story :) -this has nothing to do wif it but how do u uplaod and stuf?? im kinda new here T_T so if u can b kind enuff to tell mi and thx for da story [(^_^)]

That was AMAZING. Definitely one of the most well-written pieces I've come across here. You have a way with words, and that was such a great plot idea. Kudos! I like the way you handled the potential ripples in time that Kagome's presence would have created, but at the same time, I almost would have liked to see another chapter in which those ripples were addressed. Like, for example, her first conversation with Inuyasha being just a bit different (or a lot different), meeting Kaede for the first(second?) time, and not to mention Naraku. That would have been neat, I think, but the way you have it makes it so that it could really have happened, which is probably even better.

Anyway, great story! I stayed up til 4am to finish it because I 'couldn't put it down' (figuratively, of course!) Now I'll go kill another night's sleep by checking out your other stuff. :D Mata ne!

very well written I greatly enjoyed it.

Too lazy to log in...anyway, that was so amazing! It completely...I'm at a loss for words. Write on!

I love this, my dear ^^. The usual smartness of your plots (not to mention your mastering of time paradoxes) and your clear, evocative style of writing.

Untill our next e-mail!

that was enjoying

no way!! make him go with kikyou! she needs someone in her life man!

It was a good story!(sniffle) and then you went and.. and(sniffle) ruined it like that! Kagome always needs to be with INuYasha! Any other way is just wrong!

yes... no... oh i don't know u haven't told us yet have u. u need to update and give us the answer to the riddle, pretty plz with a cherry on top ^_^

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That was beautiful...and tragic all at once...a never ending cycle, eh?

I think I want to cry...