wats johnny story?

I realy like ur story please update!

I'm diening to know what happens.

Man, Zelda is one tough chick. How the heck can Johnny be alive if the gang went to his funeral and everything. Please Please Please update

up date!

PLEASE!

Man this story is totally Mary Sue
There is no way in hell you got a border line
How could she beat up Steve?
Yeah Getting Kneed in the groin hurts but not enough that he couldn't fight back.
Trust its not that hard.
Steve and Tyler

please please please write more!

... no offense, but I wouldn't measure your story's quality to the amount of reviews. Most people around here are idiots.

That's all.

ohh great chappie up-date soon.

cool chapter. i havnt talked to ya in awhile. well,... good one

MissLKid

hey i love your story and i hope that u up-date anyway i read all your chapters. i'm a late reader which is y i didn't review all the chaps. but if ya want me to u will. oh and you have to make zee like steve he is one of my faves, well him and soda

YAYAYAYAY! You updated! *grin* Thanks a bunch! Very good. Johnny's still my fave.

But...but..you cna't stop there keep goign! and update SOON!

I gotta suggestion - please go to w w w . angelfire.com/psy/cho.asmithee/mary-sue.outsiders.html and take my test. Thanks.

nice chapter, but u kept saying darry when u meant dally. well thats all,

MissLKid

Just post another chapter already! Jeez! I've only been waiting a couple MONTHS.