I'm speechless. I think I like the origianal better...but it was still a good story. I just can't beleive that Juliet and the Friar would do that to Romeo.

This is so far off of what could have happened, it butchers Shakespeare and ruins the characters beauty.

a lil bit surprised abt juliet decieving romeo but a good story none the less!

this story is so good. I just saw the movie Romeo and Juliet. So as i was saddened by the deaths i am happy yet again. so thanks.

Excellent work, as usual, Lady Priah. You've taken something that everyone is familiar with and completely bastardized it. It was awesome! I always knew Juliet would leave Romeo, he's such a wimp. Heh, J/K, but you made it believable, and I'm glad you made 110% on it. I love the little rose separators. Keep up the good work and update LGG!

Peace Out: Crissy

I love it!
But you changed Juliet's character slightly, I doubt she has the intelligence to do something like that...

Oh wow, that's REALLY good. Hope you'll continue on more fics like this!

YaY. Good job ol' chap. Yeah and all that jazz. You did very good. And you're right. There is not that much to pay attention to in Band. At least your story kept me awake. Keep writing. Maybe add some stuff about the GB's and PFS! hahahaha
Laters~Aly

THAT WAS SO GOD.But Juliet decieved him,how mean lol.nah it was cool. :D

This one was truly a surprise. I would never have guessed that. Juliet betraying Romeo just seems so wrong though. Great job following Shakespearian layout and stuff. It is truly amazing, your writing I mean. You're just so great at writing everything. Great alt end. Looking forward to more!

Hey, check up on your shakespearean speak, okay? 'Thou' doesn't work if you don't use the right verbs! Interesting story, though.

thats was a brilliant story althought sad. I wish it would of turned out better oh well great anyway. I can never bring myself to believe it though i have to much faith in the bond that romeo and juliet share.

This is so cool!! Great version!!

But SHE'S A **!

HEY COOL! TO TELL U THE TRUTH I wan't planning on readin' it! but then I thought, here's passionpolice we are talking about!!
I liked it! nice end very genu9ne, I actually thought he'd die but this is cooler!
NICE!
BYE

Saw the link in your info and remembering Mdawg talk about how good it was I though it was worth a read. He was right! I don't especially like reading Shakespeare but I thought your version was great. Definately better than my essay was even though my grade wasn't horrible. :-P Well, awesome job Amanda and keep writing that novel in all your notebooks! :-P :-D