This was stunning. The narrative - it was so utterly *Seifer.*

And I'm sorry, but I have to say this - shrugging one's eyebrows just sounds hilarious. I think I'll use it, though, assuming you don't mind. The whole bit's getting redundant - raising, arching, cocking one's eyebrow...

Anyway. Thanks for this. ^^ Another little piece of Seifer for me to remember.

Luv yoo!

I don't know where to start...There are so many things that make this fic great, and that make it so uniquely yours. The largest (and most spiky and awkward) obstacle I come up with when writing is how to make the characters seem real, how to get into their heads and not sound gimmicky, and the second largest is seeing people like you do it so effortlessly. Seifer never really interested me in FFVI, but a new perspective was just what I needed (although he isn't quite up there with Kiros and Laguna yet), and that re-write took a great fic and made it into a memorable, believable and engrossing one full of delightful black humour.

I LOVE IT! Great characterization!! (I think I spelt that wrong. . . oh well) The best part is how you ended it. If anybody asks, this was a training session. Just great!