Oh, I love it! The story is so awsome! I'm really glad that Merle played an important because she is my second favorite character. I'm so happy I'm gonna go read the sequal right now! Thank you so much for writing the fics! I don't know whhat I would do without you guys.

The poem has great feeling to it. Through it is simple and in some parts vague, you can get the dift of what he is feeling. However I do suggest that you show in more depth why he longs for her. Maybe it could be her soft voice which once whispered words so dear to his youthful heart, etc etc but add more knowledge so that the reader can feel more of not just what he feels but why.

nice story

Great ending!

frankie speaking: after i read this whole one, i was longing to see what's up more...ok to judge the plot,: kinda twisty but beautiful, ah ha ha ha ha ! you know it's so funny to hear Gabriella went calling Hitomi "Maid? Maid? Where are you maid?" ehe he he he and to think that 'she' calls herself smart she sounds more like a dumbass kickin' puny actin-to-be-a-future-queen in front of Van but get caught by her own dopey words. Ha! actually, it's so good that you made this last chap longer that i didn't find myself very down with less events. wohoo! and i VERY much like the cheesy v-h scenes. overall, i find this a lighthearted romantic comedy with no much ek ek on the background - geesshh! (i'm running out of vocabularies!)

Great story! Wow! It's fantastic! Keep up the good work! :)

I ead it the whole way throyugh and i swear that was good... how do i get soo addicted to your escaflowne fanfic...im so glad ur on my no 1 ist yep yep!

now im going off to get addicted to the sequel to this oh hitomi. then ill read all your escafanfic then ill go onto hary potter and get addicted to that too.

lucky me. don you think.

faves list! I luv this story, so sweet and fluffy and funny in at least once a chapter...::yawns:: it's 11:44 pm on a school night, and I hafta get up early...not to mention I was playing baseball all day...so...I must go to bed! lol! I really liked this story, continue writing your vision reborn one! well, congrats on yet another master piece! ::starts to yawn again:: nighty night!

awesome ja ne!

Happy happy little story : Even if it isn't so little. Long happy stories are GOOD!

Yay! Very good! Great Job!

Good riddence to bad trash. Gabrialla was a major pain in the butt! I lve the poems that you've inserted in here. They are just so sweet and pretty. I'm hoping to see more stories from you. Always the Best! Lady Ayanami

that was so totally good! and so kawaii! i love the whole thing with merle being the one to break the engagment and the potion thing and especially how gabriella went missing. and fyi, i put u on my fav. author's list. _ *Maura*

okay, so far, i love this! you are really good at writing poems and songs! *Maura*

Is it just me or...is there a BIG lack of Merle/Hitomi and Van/Merle stories?