|Reviews for Betrayed|
| move-easy 5/14/13 . chapter 26
wow this was one amazing story. I have never read anything like it.
congrats and thanks for creating and sharing something so outstanding.
I would have read it in one go if it were not for exams, presentations and what not. it still kept me up reaaaaally late. :D
| Zarosian Chaos 5/13/13 . chapter 26
Wow. Truly an amazing story, one that would rarely appear on this site. I applaud you good sir, for writing such an amazing piece of work.
| Geo Nova 5/12/13 . chapter 23
You say that you needed to kill her to motivate Harry. But another method was open to you that you already set up:
You stated that Draco would take over Dumbledore's position at hogwarts if he dies, Draco's takeover of his daughters school could have been the motivation.
| swedenarashifan 5/10/13 . chapter 1
ooo the angst! *shudders*
| Katie 5/5/13 . chapter 26
Really well written story. Loved it.
| Enforcer123 5/3/13 . chapter 26
Nice work, really had fun reading it
| Guest 4/28/13 . chapter 13
| xander77 4/17/13 . chapter 26
Kul, very cool.
| Fallen-Petals15 4/17/13 . chapter 5
You keep changing Person, not point of view, person and it;s horrible and annoying. It makes your work look sloppy, I realise that this story is complete but bare this advice in mind for other stories if you don't wish to lose readers
| HonorLove 4/14/13 . chapter 18
You're not the first fanfic author to have Luna wander in when she felt like it. :) That said, I've always felt it was part of her charm!
| sneaky lunitic spy 4/9/13 . chapter 26
I love this! it felt a bit slow at the start but then it snowballed and got me hooked!
| MissNikita 4/6/13 . chapter 26
Brilliant story, havent read one I liked this much in quite some time.
| kahurikuul 4/4/13 . chapter 26
It was a bit fast-paced in the beginning, but you found a comfortable rhythm and wrote an amazing story.
| Ezmathet 3/29/13 . chapter 26
Great story. Made me really sad when his wife died.
| Guest 3/22/13 . chapter 26
This is, without a doubt, my favorite Harry Potter fan fiction piece. I loved it as much as the original series itself. Brilliant work that remained true to the characters and the world of Harry Potter!