| Reviews for Betrayed |
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move-easy 5/14/13 . chapter 26wow this was one amazing story. I have never read anything like it. congrats and thanks for creating and sharing something so outstanding. I would have read it in one go if it were not for exams, presentations and what not. it still kept me up reaaaaally late. :D thank you! |
Zarosian Chaos 5/13/13 . chapter 26Wow. Truly an amazing story, one that would rarely appear on this site. I applaud you good sir, for writing such an amazing piece of work. |
Geo Nova 5/12/13 . chapter 23You say that you needed to kill her to motivate Harry. But another method was open to you that you already set up: You stated that Draco would take over Dumbledore's position at hogwarts if he dies, Draco's takeover of his daughters school could have been the motivation. |
swedenarashifan 5/10/13 . chapter 1ooo the angst! *shudders* |
Katie 5/5/13 . chapter 26 Really well written story. Loved it. |
Enforcer123 5/3/13 . chapter 26Nice work, really had fun reading it |
Guest 4/28/13 . chapter 13 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww |
xander77 4/17/13 . chapter 26Kul, very cool. |
Fallen-Petals15 4/17/13 . chapter 5You keep changing Person, not point of view, person and it;s horrible and annoying. It makes your work look sloppy, I realise that this story is complete but bare this advice in mind for other stories if you don't wish to lose readers |
HonorLove 4/14/13 . chapter 18You're not the first fanfic author to have Luna wander in when she felt like it. :) That said, I've always felt it was part of her charm! |
sneaky lunitic spy 4/9/13 . chapter 26I love this! it felt a bit slow at the start but then it snowballed and got me hooked! |
MissNikita 4/6/13 . chapter 26Brilliant story, havent read one I liked this much in quite some time. |
kahurikuul 4/4/13 . chapter 26It was a bit fast-paced in the beginning, but you found a comfortable rhythm and wrote an amazing story. |
Ezmathet 3/29/13 . chapter 26Great story. Made me really sad when his wife died. |
Guest 3/22/13 . chapter 26 This is, without a doubt, my favorite Harry Potter fan fiction piece. I loved it as much as the original series itself. Brilliant work that remained true to the characters and the world of Harry Potter! |