really good

I think this is the best quote I've ever read!

"Time and time again, this government has proved itself filled with incompetent fools who are more interested in lining their own pockets and their own comfortable station than they are with the welfare of the people they supposedly serve. And all you people disgust me just as much, allowing them to lord their power over you and allowing corruption to spread like a plague because it does not affect you or because you actually benefit from kickbacks." He paused a moment and then said something that he knew would offend their proud bearings, "You are less than any muggle people or government on this planet. At least in that world there is some semblance of a struggle against the decay of complacency that you allow yourselves to fester and rot in."

damn.. you killed Kathryn one of the two likeable oc ive seen in all of harry potter fanfiction... you are one devious MFer( no offence)

i thought this would suck thank you for proveing me wrong

Definitely not what I was expecting when I clicked on the link to this story! But it was really superb! Congrats! I read a lot of fanfic and every now and again I find a new idea, this was one of those moments!

Brilliant story!

I can't believe I ran into this story now,about 10 year after I had first read it. I remember I very much disliked it. So, since chance placed this story in front of my eyes again ten years later, I decided to check my first impression and made myself reread it. Nope, my opinion is the same: I find that I am still disgusted with absolutely everything in this story - the ton, the plot, the characterization, the morals. I sincerely hope I will never have the misfortune of running into this story again.

Simply Incredible story.

An awesome story. Just one question though: what was the extra thing Dumbledore told Harry? I think I missed it, but I can't figure out what it was.

Ok this was a good story, with only a few blips you kept us intrigued and very caring of Harry his wife and family, and Creative pairings with more Wizard/Muggle marriages than the norm.

I'm a bit disappointed with Hermione's behavior and that last way they tried to salvage Ron was a bit too little too late. Because here Ron wasn't as important a character as say Hermione. And, the lack of Luna here is sad. She is such a catalyst and is a very good tool for an author to use.

Overall a "B" as in a recommended read but not a classic... yet!

I'll look at your other stories and see what else you got that can be as good or better!

dennisud

Luna marrying a non magicsal?

Neat!

One of the only stories where Hermione is believable as Ron's wife!

Being trek fan too ever thought of doing an HP/Voyager crossover? Or even more an Enterprise/HP cross!

;-)

dennisud

I would have paired Hermione with Neville and Ron with either Luna or Susan bones. Still believable!

I would think that Hermione would have been the one to figure out who Harry was. I also saw that she wasn't mentioned much as a lead betrayer but she carries her guilt here.

Good start. Can't wait to read the rest!

dennisud

I've cried multiple times while reading this story. I hope your happy. Amazing story, though.

Ah, I have to say that I really did love your story very much, so in light of that and all the words that don't seem to want to come to me right now, I thank you!

Good story!