 volli the 1 critic 2008-12-20 . chapter 3Man! This story is pretty good! |
 Nikana 2005-01-15 . chapter 3 WHAT?!?!?!? You can not leave it there! PLEASE CARRY ON SON! |
 Jellybean Rulz 2004-10-19 . chapter 1That was absoloutly FANTASTIC ! ^_^
UPDATE ! PLZ !
I BEG OF YOU !! *goes down on knees*
...Ahem...in other words...
Please update soon !
i look forward 2 the new Chapter 4 |
 MyStIc BlAcK PhOeNix 2004-09-11 . chapter 3WICKED!! please kill the bunies quickly! so you can update this awsome fic! |
 Unknown 2003-12-10 . chapter 3 Update |
 Lost in the Shadows 2003-09-01 . chapter 3Kewl story! Keep it up and update soon! |
 tippytoes 2003-08-16 . chapter 3O! I REALLY like this story! UPDATE! |
 Tears of Eternal Darkness 2003-07-27 . chapter 1um...good
but me thinks u need a little bit more detail in what is acually going on
just a little thought *dogges things thrown at her head* |
 Kiina 2003-07-26 . chapter 2Please write more!
I like your story!!
Kiina |
 Kiina 2003-07-26 . chapter 1hehe...little Kai is angry?
Cute!
Kiina |
 Aras Melanki 2003-05-12 . chapter 1 I loved this story. Hope that you will continue this story, and I hope to read more. :P |
 YokoandKurasgirl 2003-04-30 . chapter 2hi`s neet ok get out of fantisyland well good update |
 devildragon 2003-04-19 . chapter 2 Nice story...not what I was expecting which makes it a little more interesting. I want to read more of it though...and SOON! (earth shakes and sky trembles) whoops!
The critic,
Devildragon or Pain |
 ShadowDragon22 2003-04-19 . chapter 2this is a great fic, I love it, it sounds very interesting, I've never seen a fic where Kai is a superhero, please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next, Bye.
~ShadowDragon22~ |
 2 lazy 2 think of a name 2003-04-02 . chapter 1 Well, that was different. cool, but odd. |