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Galaen 2007-07-10 . chapter 7
I'd LOVE more Bali and Obi-Wan stories. I'd really, really love to read and find out if Bali ever discovers that Obi-Wan is his biological father, not just his father in deed (i.e. Master). I'm really interested to see how you'd write the reactions of the characters. I'd also love to see the saga of this line continued, including his apprenticeship of Leia and how the Jedi have dealt with the twins knowing their mother and how Amidala has been dealing with losing both of her children, her last ties to Anakin, to the Jedi. I know it's not necessarily "losing" them but she's still not really allowed to be their mother, is she? Not in the truest sense of the word. And how would Bali and his understanding of biological families/parents (if he ever finds out about Halla and Obi) factor into the family dynamics of the Skywalkers? There is so much you could keep doing with this and I'd love to see it written. I hope you continue writing. I love this Master-Padawan team and the whole plot and different path that you've written for Obi-Wan and the creation of Bali and the larger role that Bant has played in these stories.
Marie Kenobi 2005-08-11 . chapter 7
Very cute stories! Bali and Obi-Wan were made for each other! :-)
Laura of Maychoria 2005-03-27 . chapter 7
I did not think these stories were pointless at all. All were very lovely slices of life, sweet or poignant or challenging. I noticed that Bali has started to be identified as the Padawan who giggles a lot, rather than one who is afraid all the time. That was a wonderful indication of how much life changed for him when Obi-Wan became his Master.

Very, very lovely. Will there be more?
Night Of The Land 2005-02-24 . chapter 7
why did u not put these in the stories? they were great very fun the people in the libary thuoght i had lost it so yea very funny!
keep it up ,red rose knight, keep it up

Night Of The Land
Elizabeth 2003-12-21 . chapter 7
I can't tell you how much I love your Book of Paths stories. Bali is my favorite original character in any fandom, not just SW. I've been a lurker for about a year now, both here and on TF.net, and I love your stories! You are one of the best fanfic writers out there. :o)
Elizabeth
Elizabeth 2003-12-21 . chapter 7
I can't tell you how much I love your Book of Paths stories. Bali is my favorite original character in any fandom, not just SW. I've been a lurker for about a year now, both here and on TF.net, and I love your stories! You are one of the best fanfic writers out there. :o)
Elizabeth
Ziptango 2003-08-25 . chapter 7
Aww, loved everyone of them ^-^ Beautiful descriptions!

*~*~*ziptango*~*~*
Yoda 2003-08-22 . chapter 7
"The Force demands you must continue this story of snapshots." ::waves hands:: Update more, you must. Force has chosen you too update, you well. Leave us hanging, this I cannot allow. Endure many hardships us viewers well. If you do not update. ::Hits Red Rose Knight with his gimmer stick::
Anonymous 2003-07-08 . chapter 7
These snapshots are just wonderful and add so much to the "Path" series. Great job, rrk, I hope you'll write more *waves hand*; you WILL write more... ;-)
mvdiva 2003-06-20 . chapter 7
I keep picturing Bali as Anakin's little dark-haired human friend from TPM. Either way, he's still adorable. These brief little snapshots into his training and Obi-Wan's healing are just adorable.
LuvEwan 2003-06-19 . chapter 7
Hey! **waves**

What a wonderful, warm insight into Obi and Bali's life together between the longer fics. Perfect, of course. ;) Deserves a lot more replies though...Gee...I wonder if we have a few...hundred...LURKERS around here! **raises eyebrow and wags finger** Beautiful, red.
anaticulapraecantrix 2003-05-29 . chapter 5
aw *big happy sigh*
padawankitara 2003-05-28 . chapter 4
RRK, I still love these little gems just as much as the first time I read themm
jediknickers 2003-04-08 . chapter 3
aww..sweet! is there going to be any more?
lighted eagle 2003-04-05 . chapter 1
ohh...only one word came to mind while i was reading that...cute!!
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