i love your story and i'm glad u updated, i can't wait to read a bit more. keep up the good work-hopefully the chapters will be longer in the future-and we won't have to wait so long for an upadte.
Luv
Gemini Enchantress

Omigosh! This is the bestest LOTR story ever! How in the world did you think of this? Think of more soon!!

This is a good beginning for the story, and if I my say so, is also a good way to open the plot. I like Frodo stories, but adding another character, quite a clever idea.
It makes sense that Frodo should go back to the Shire to see his everlasting friends; Sam, Merry, and Pippin and meet love. (This is my opinion, ok.)
I really enjoyed it, and I hope to see more stories. Great job!

Allright, you seriously need to update! did you abandon this story? because i'm still waiting for another chapter. please please please please update! or at least an author's note or something! please :'(
~E*A

good story

I can tell that this is going to be a great story that keep hanging on the edge! You have fabulous detail and I can tell you're building up to a wonderful story. Keep up the great work, I can't wait for you to finish it!
Nika

i really like it, but i am still waiting for the next chapter. i can't wait anymore i have to know what happens. oh, in the last sentence of chap 6 u might want to use "Frodo eyelid's opened.." just so u r not being repetitive. just a thought. still can't wait to read more

As ever, you astound me w/ your writing skills. If I were able to write half as well as you, then I would be very well off! Continue writing, your peice is rocking my stockings! (P.s: Frodo has red eyes! Argh!! Scary! *Hides under blanket* tee hee.)

i can't belive it! i love the story! Frodo is so cute. I can not wait to read more.

What kind of name is MINDY? Yeah, I think lots of Hobbits would be dying to have a great 21st century name like that...
Also, when Frodo was young, Merry and Pippin were either not born or pretty much toddlers.
Mindy is Pippin's fiancee? What in the Shire were you thinking? Pippin marries Diamond of Long Cleeve after Frodo leaves for the Grey Havens. And there is never another Dark Lord that somehow makes and loses a Ring of Power. How did that happen so quickly?

This part I have not reveiwed yet so this would be the first time. In this one I got lost. Who has the ring? Mindy or Frodo? Are there two rings?

Love this one too. Very fun and exiting. Don't change a thing.

I love this part. don't change a thing. Very descriptive.

I love this part because it kicks off the adventure.

I just got back the review from my teacher and she said go for it! Keep going and see if you can publish. Now I am going to REwrite my reveiws again for you. For this part. When the elf is introduced, try discribing what he looks like. Other than that I like it.