Ugh... what a horrible story... i can't believe i actually wasted my time reading this... but anyway, i'll give you some constructive criticism and tell you what's wrong with it: everything. Your grammar, your short chapters, your badly-developed plot... i hope your next story is better than this, if you're thinking of writing another story.

please continue this one!

finaly a g/m fan! i love tha story! keep it up i don't have much time so i'll jet! keep it up
Later days,
Jenny

cool

i REALLY loved it! you have to finish, that was GREAT! and i NEVER read lmG fanfic, but this was AWESOME!

u gotta update soon b/c i NEED 2 see gordo and miranda admit their feelings for eachother! good writing!

Really, I don't mean to sound harsh but I can't really read what I'm seeing. The spelling and grammatical errors have gotten to the point that it's making people seem OOC. Really, your story would be 100% better if you'd use the damn spell-checker!

Thanks for listening.

I love M/G a lot - generally UC couples fics are done much better than L/G. So good choice for the coupling.

However, I'd really appreciate it if you used a spelling/grammar-checker. It is kind of jarring to read something like "'Why think of an excuse, when the truth works just as good?' He asked rhetorically" - the grammar's off and it's hard on some people's eyes .

But really, that's my only criticism so far. Nice job. :)

Gordo def. needs to talk to Miranda

This is good, too bad its almost done. This is one of my fav M/G stories, keep it up.

Aw, she didn't tell him, but this chapter was great.

Yay! Great job with the chapters, but the suspense is killing me. Will they just tell each other already...but I guess they do soon if you only have a few chapters left.

Ah so sweet! They must tell each other! Ohh I love it! Keep going!

Oh my gosh have them confess their feelings already! I feel like it's such a long wait. Please I'm getting impatient. Sorry about that. I just love this story but spell check it a little more.

OOh I didn't know Lizzie would find out early in the game! Wow. Nice. Keep it up!