HAPPY ENDING! And please update this story, don't give up on it.

Hello!

Your story has been added to Knight and Maiden, a Sabewan C2 archive here in =) Keep up the Sabewan love!

ah don't end here! more more more!hey you did really good for your first fanfic.:)

Great Job! I really enjoyed your story :o) Please continue!

this is a cool story and it took me awhile to read it but it was good :) :) it was good yep it was and you want to know something else it is super good yep yep yep super good.

UPDATE!don't make me nag just do it! :P

hehe good chappie i like that he was speechless and it doesn't look like you are going to suck at love scenes :)

Andrea, no one is gonna pronounce my name right, and thanks for putting me second! I like the idea though, if i ever get my story to the point of them actually being in school you and bryan were going to be some students. hehe.
great chapter! talk later!
tootles,
rogue

hey,
good, good, not bad, not boring. and you know me happy ending type person here. well i know you want long reviews but i cant really write too long a one because im talking to you and bry t the same time and its getting kinda confusing.
tootles,
rogue

I don't think you should ask the readers about the ending, I think you should let it go naturally as the story goes. If you've planned events that will lead one way or the other, you follow that route.

The setup is very interesting, and I'd like to see you continue.

Obi-wan. i really liked how you put the detail in this chapter! even the smallest of sentences have a lot of detail in them!and i understand that you didnt get your chapter up when you had a lot going on and i could relate!lol!heres a sugestion i think you should have your chapters put together so they are longer but that is just my opinion! well like i always say, please continue writing whatever you enjoy! WiccanWillow23

good job! this chapter really got my emotions involved.

oh...and good luck on the romantic scences, i'm in the same boat as you are there...can't write them for a darn...i always feel like they're too corny... :D

after reading your note at the begining of this chapter, i realized that i was telling you the wrong person. ::smacks herself in the head:: Sorry! My Bad! You're right it should have been 3rd person, not 2nd.

oh yeah...about the story. love the direction, still flowing nicely...blah...blah...blah... ;D

this chapter was great. you wrote the whole thing in 2ns person. way to go! i loved it. it's flowing good. don't worry about the length. the story will play out the way the story will play out. length doesn't matter. keep writing and i hope that you had fun in Orlando. :D

i'm still liking it. the story seems to be flowing well, except for the use of 1st person again at the begining of the story and then the switch to 2nd person. other than that, i really liked this story.