FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| monkaholic 2005-01-19 ch 1,  | abuseGreat story! I love how it is written, and I think it fits Rikku perfectly. Auron is definitely in character, silent and sexy! |
| __________ 2005-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, excellent job with writing Auron...as dead-sexy (no pun intended) and as frustrating as he is in the game. Rikku isn't quite bouncy enough, but still, she's in a contemplative mood, so it's okay. And you saw a guy who looks like Auron...? Damn, lucky you. And you didn't get his number? |
| Sakura 2004-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseUpdate Date Pretty Peas! (there round and green) |
| Dragon of Zanarkand 2003-10-10 ch 1, | abuseAw...how cute.This is the best Auikku fic I`v read. |
| spootyspootspoot 2003-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt sounds really good so far! Please write more! |
| Fernalidana 2003-07-15 ch 1, | abusehey, i remember this... that dude on the Pirates ride DID look awfully like Auron, ne? too bad we had to deal with sergey the second time through X_X |
| fadedjae 2003-04-03 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, what a great little ficlit! Rikku is absolute perfect and you've characterized Auron fantastically as well. More more more! I love your writing! |
| tuatha danaan 2003-04-02 ch 1, | abuseoh, this is so good. Loads of UST, and very expressive first person narrative. I hope you write that longer fic soon. : ) |
| Blurry 2003-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuse*claps* I love it! |
| Captain Lynza 2003-04-02 ch 1, | abuseHeh. This is better mechanically than many of the Auron / Rikku things I've read, and the characterization behind Rikku is a lot more accurate. Too many teenage girls like to put too much of themselves into the Rikku character, and you've managed not to distort her. Well done. Here's 5 Linza Points. ~ L PS- When were you at Magic Kingdom? And in Florida, or California? I think I know who you're talking about. |
| yunalesca78 2003-04-02 ch 1, | abuseToo cool! You have a lovely writing style and I would love to see more of your work. You could even extend this one and work on a little Aurikku romance...oh, that gives me an idea. Keep up the great work! |
| darkintrigue 2003-04-02 ch 1, | abuseFellow Auron worshiper I salute you! Brilliantly written and is going straight onto faves. *sighs* m Auron... |