Excellent! What can I say but WOW!.

im confused. is jarod really dead? i mean, is parker just cracking, or is he really... alive somehow?

Hi Blademistress,

Great story, but I did not like the ending. Hope the sequel has a happier ending.
M.

Ah, Miss Parker and Jarod together at last. This is good... but the Centre on their tail, that would be bad. I am anxious to see them team up and Chase their dream together, instead of Miss Parker chasing Jarod. LOL
Looking forward to more from you soon my bright and shining Blade!

Hi Blafemistress,
Thank you for continuing this great story. Looking forward to your next update.
M.

so they killed parker?
from Kimmers

Okay. That might make more sense as a sequel if you changed some of the details to match the conversations in The beginning of the end... I get the distinct impression that Parker died or something equally horrible. You could write another where Jarod gets revenge on the people who did it and the centre. Just a thought.

Whoa, we died? Miss Parker? Is Jarod ok? Did he survive? Who was in the room with Lyle and Raines? What about Angelo? It can't be finished yet, I have to many questions!

Okay. Whatever.

Creepy and dark. It was original and unexpected though.

Hi Blademistress,

Your story was very intriguing and dark. Hope the next one has a happier ending. Well done.

yea, that was great, so...intense adn those lights on-lights off - really good. but I'm too a little bit confused. Was that Jarod whose sgadow she saw? or it was MP imagination? And...and...well, need a sequel:-)

that was good, but i'm confused...