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| Diana3 2003-04-05 ch 1, | abuseKatja, All I can really say is that I was directed here by Karen from the Alias Recs blog, and... well. You have an amazing grasp on the characters. I love the smooth flow you have here, the quietness the exists behind each word, each paragraph. Gah, you've got me reading all three things you have here so far and wishing for more. Beautiful. Diana |
| Fanatic482 2003-04-02 ch 1, | abuseThis piece was just beautifully written... Not so sure that you captured the complete complexity that is Irina, but I enjoyed the insight into Sark... Not to mention that Sarkina is just, well, so friggin hot... *grin* You didn't make them any more emotional than they are, and I loved that... It's rare to find a story that presents them but doesn't try to explain them... *claps* Much love for the story. Any chance of getting more? |
| Jen 2003-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust *so* completely lovely. Moving, fascinating, emotional. For such a short piece, it packs a lot of power. Great job! Two favorite bits: ""If I say yes..." He's uncomfortable making a joke, so he whispers it against her back instead, and the gamble pays off: she actually laughs, and he tries to burn the moment into his memory." and: "he knows the location of every scar on her skin, and she knows too much about him to buy his arrogance now." Ah, just perfectly done! |