I actually loved the sweetness in this... (^^)

This is one of my favorites-such a sweet, beautiful story.I think you summed up Eiri's feeling perfectly. I have always wondered why so many stories so him to be such a mean heartless bastard when in both the anime and manga he really isn't. Great insight! Please--write more

That was really sweet...I really like the 'you-form' style too...

~flames

It's an interesting story, and a good change from all those fics about Yuki or Shuichi not really loving each other. You should write some more stories about them.

PS I think its called Second Person POV not You-form. Just so you know ^_^

OMG! That was brilliant! ^^ So awsome! I loved how you used Second person to write this. IT's very different from all the other fics i've read.

this was utterly adorable, i love you're work. i hope you keep it up!
/hugs for you!/
apocalipticoblivion

That was so sweet. I loved it! And I never noticed that Shuichi was never really forced onto the couch! Well it was really great *heart* ^.^

Cool! I love Gravi! This is good though, because not many people write in 2nd person, and you did a good job with it. ^^

I found the POV in that fic quite interesting, and comfortable. You'll pulled it off really well, and didn't even get your tenses mixed! (Well, you might of, but I certainly didn't notice.) Yuki seems IC amazingly enough for such a WAFFY piece.

I was wondering where Shuuichi was. I more thought he was on tour then sick though...Thank god you didn't make me think he was dead.

I absolutely adore this fic! Saw it originally out at mediaminer and it has been so flaky it has not allowed me to leave a review there. SO GLAD I found this great story here as well!

I find this story so totally believable and in character for both of them.

My only observation for improvement are some very minor punctuation and tense issues, but I can forgive them so easily because this story still flows well.

I would LOVE to host it on my site, when I finally get my gravi section and the new interface uploaded. Mostly I draw EiriXSyuichi pics but am working on my own, uber-long story as well.

Please, may I host this wonderful fic?

*weak in the knees* That was unbelievably cute, I'm gushy all over now!! What wonderful fluffy work! *G*

That was so wonderfully, beautifully sweet!
I completely agree with you, about Yuki missing Shuichi. Just watch episode four, where he is staring at his mug, or episode five, where he looks at the chair next to his desk.
And you are also right about the couch. I never thought about it though. But its very Shuichi-like just to sleep there.
I think you got it all ricgt. Couldn't you please write more? Please?
I especially love the part where you describe, how Shuichi winds himself around Yuki. That's just how I would imagine them to sleep.

Wow, that was really good. I liked the perspective of it and I think you really caught the way Yuki feels. Nice job.

^^ Atsureki-senpai, you are truly one of the best authors on this site. Truly. Another great piece.

I loved the second person perspective, and how you used it in the story. It's really a pity that very few people use it when they write, because it gives rise to quite wonderful things, like your story. I quite liked it, indeed I did.

Oh, and near the end you used "bendy," inside quotations... I don't know if you did that for fun, but stylistically, and because Yuki is a bad-assed writer, he'd probably use something more along the lines of "flexible."

Eh, that was just a silly suggestion. You're quite welcome to ignore it, I made it because the word was inside quotations and all...