brilliant

Excellent! thank you for finishing this, it was really an amazing story...but it ended so soon... please write more stories!

I am in awe of your story-telling talents. Yet another perfect story!

GREAT GREAT! GREAT GREAT! man i need to widen my vocab...but in the mean time GREAT!

Great job...i loved your story a lot...very much...it was great...

Very good story, loved it. Congrats on finishing too, that is quiet the accomplishemnt!!

That was great, Best story ever.

Thanks for finishing it. Great ending! I love the story. I wonder if they ever find out what Jesse did at the safehouse. How he beat up all those guys and Elaine, while in tramendous pain. They wilol never under estimate him again. Great story!! Love it!

he is going to come back to sanctuary. He can't Leave. Good chapter Thanks for review my story I have another story there if you want to read it. I love your story it rocks.

It was a great story. Thanks for writing it.

Hey Laily, that was a great story. I hope you don't stop writing MX stories okay.

WooHOO! Go Laily! Awesome story!! I'm so sad it's all finished :(, but I can read it again! LOL! GOOD JOB! Phrase from Mickey D's, "I'm Lovin' IT!"

that was simply beautiful!!

can't send you Jesse...sorry, this is the best I can do. and about all I can say is wow. this chapter was probably the best yet and not just because it was the end. the Adam/Jesse banter at the end was particularly appealing... I can't wait to hear more of your other work!

Hey Laily.
I love your story and I love Jesse too. I hope next time you will write more stories and of course more Jesse too. Keep up the good work.