aw. that was awesome! i loved the interaction you had between jonas and jack. it was fantastic. excellent story.

great fic!

THAT is one of the best Stargate stories I've read! Great job!

I really enjoyed this story. Aside from the over all quality of the piece, I'm also one of those fans who loves both Jonas and Daniel, so I was grateful to find yet another well-written piece featuring Jonas. I'm discovering that they are out there if I just look hard enough and am grateful that I stumbled across yours.

It's also nice to see a piece dealing more closely with Jack's transition from Daniel to Jonas. While the series did spend what I considered an adequate amount of time on it (it is a television series - they have to move on sometime), there still seemed to be a jump skipping said transition. Your portrayal of the shifting in Jack and Jonas' relationship was very beautifully written.

I usually try to give some constructive critism, but I honestly didn't find anything in here. Your characterizations were wonderfully done and spot on, in my opinion. The dialouge was realistic and flowed nicely. I also liked how you managed to create a situation in which Jack and Jonas would be forced to face this issue. There wasn't even any grammer or spelling errors for me to nit-pick. At least none that I saw.

All in all, a wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing it with us.

~Delsie

Hey, I read this one a while back, and thought I'd drop a line. I honestly have to say this is one of the best SG-1 stories featuring Jonas I've managed to find anywhere. Being the Jonas-obsessed person I am, that's saying a lot, believe me. But more than that, telling the story through Jack's eyes, and getting the characters so dead on makes it exceptional. My favorite part was when Jack slipped and called him Daniel without thinking. Funny, yet strangely sad at the same time.

Excellent work. You should write another one. lol

I really, really, REALLY loved this fic! can't say exactly why, it was just all so good and added up to a complete whole. Yeah, really nice. But (there's always a but) I--personally, anyone could disagree--thought the end . . . i dunno, dragged on kinda, Jack and Genereal Hammond's conversation seemed kinda superflouis.
But I need to stress that I REALLY liked it! really! (you get the point, right?)

really good fic. excellent Jack/Jonas interaction. :) they're my fave characterss, now that Daniel is gone. *sigh*

anyway, this fic was really well written, i loved it! :D

Wonderful fic! All the characters sound remarkably like themselves, especially Jack. Seriously, how many times has he said "Dammit, Daniel!" without even really realizing it? The fact that Jonas *isn't* Daniel and that was ** Jack, given his friendship with Daniel, was a little smoothed over in the actual series (except for a couple of screaming matches, I think). And, furthermore, Jack and Jonas are just so *cute* here. I love it. Short fic, but well done all the same!

Wow, that's very good.
I also like Jonas, even if I miss Daniel, and I think they are alike in many things. Jonas is always so enthusiastic and optimistic, like Daniel was in the beginning.
You characterize Jack very well, and I like how you show his feelings. That's exactly what I think he feels about the situation with Jonas.

Wow. I wish I could write like this. It was so very insightful and intricate that I don't even know where to begin singing your praise. The characters were perfectly in character, the dialogue was believeable, the plot was not lacking in any way and you provided a wonderful sense of closure. I look forward to more of your SG-1 fics, this one absolutley took my breath away.

Very good chapter. You did an excellent job with the characterizations and the bits of humor. You should definitely continue, I would like to know what's really going on at this planet after Jonas recovers. I like both Jonas and Daniel. Please keep writing. :)

This is a wonderful story, well-written and just the right length. It's nice to see some Jonas fanfiction springing up out there... I'd love to see more like this from you! Keep writing!

I really loved this story. And the way you have them bond. Excellent. This story is not a just a simple addition to the greatness of that universe. S*C

Really enjoyed this story. I was glad to see someone handling Jonas with compassion. I like his character.

Brilliant fic, you should write more stargate ones! M'gonna put this in me favs! Thanks for the great read.