I'm an avid clancy reader, havent gotten to read the delta force books yet. Seems short. and cut off too. i could fill up several pages with just one action shot.

PS, add more detail.
Pss, lots of it.

WHAT THE **!!
This is probably one of the best fics ive read, next to "That Others May Live" and ofcourse mine. Unlike most of the 12 yearolds on here you did your homework. Like I tell others, dont just read Clancy, yea hes good but there are others i.e. CSM Eric Haney-Inside Delta Force, and some of the other cheap books like Delta Force from the POWER series.
Anyways fukin awesome- LRSU out!