tis is Inuyasha lover #1.As long as you keep writing this storys i'm happy.Unlike those VULTURS.

Good story so far. I only wish you would separate the parts where the POV changes. It can get confusing.

I think Sesshomaru's fluffy thingy is call Mokomoko. Good story by the way.

hi im kim byles
i really liked your story twoo weeks it was well writen and i really liked it. thats saying alot comeing from me cuz its eally hard for a story to make me cry and this one really put tears in my eyes. it took me a little while to read it cuz of all the chapters but it was well worth the time. if you have any other inguyasha and kagome stories please send them to me at k.
for i am a big inuyasha fan and love to read stories on him. so feel free to send them when ever you need some one to read a story to see if its good. k.
-kim byles

jajajaja very funny the slave part jaja maybe for girls they turn them into ho´s or somthing but wait inuyasha NEVER met his father duh his father died while saving his mother from somkind of kidnapped cause bya youkai that also was in love with her and wanted to kill inutaisho to be with her inuyasha mother left the palace with inuyasha just born ! and she made her life without inutaisho the whole story is on the movie ¨SWORDS OF AN HONORABLE RULER¨ well anyway i guess its youre fic and watever it super good so far and its taking me decades to finish it its almost like a book! but i love it!"!

sayo!"!

*(^_^)* vanillasky!

we need treatment jaja cuz we are inuyashaholic jajajaja we need therapy but you know wat?

YOUR STORY ROCKS MY WORLD !

so good

cool story.

me and all of my friends would go to this park that had like a wooden castle sort of theme to it and play tag until all hours of the night... until the cops caught on and started waiting for us. They get really touchy if you're there past dusk... but those were some of the best times of my life, albeit i'm only 19 years old but NONE-THE-LESS!

O.o Whoa.

That stuff with the little logical part was priceless!

However, you said you wanted some criticism. Well, I've noticed a lot of grammatical errors--some screwed up commas and such-- and spelling errors that are likely to just be typos. When you have the time, it would make the story easier to read if you would fix these things.

Go Atma! Great solution. Now try it on Inuyasha and Sesshomaru!

Okay, now I'm just freaked out. She's really lost it, though that seems to help in battle . . . GO MIRSAN SHIPPING!

"fluffy-chan" killed me. How did Rin get so much older?

Oh damnit