|Reviews for What's going on!|
| grimreaper3000 8/8/03 . chapter 2
cool please continue
| LoMaRiBa 6/1/03 . chapter 1
I couldn't find your e-mail, so I'm responding through your reviews. Hope you don't mind!
It is the end of the story, there may be some type of sequel in the future, but most likely not a direct one. Someone suggested they go along with Daryl on his school trip.
I really don't think they'd be able to truly relax on a vacation-they'd be waiting for the bad things to start happening and not be able to relax! :o)
Thanks for reading and for the great reviews!
| mary merowland1990aol.com-reposted by author 5/2/03 . chapter 2
I reckon that loads more people would read this if you made the description clearer. I thought this was great-so creepy!
| Kinky 4/17/03 . chapter 2
OMG! How could you leave an ending like that? You are so mean. I can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry up, now! I comand you to be done very soon and post it up as soon as you are done with it. This is a great chapter. Though your first one was weird (that could be why you said you don't have to read it). Please continue. This is a good story so far.
| Zeblien 4/10/03 . chapter 1
Very mysterious, creepy. It reminds me of the self thoughts in Momento; and it does a good job of grabbing attention. Keep on the writting, and remember - descriptions descriptions descriptions.
| Darth Mongoose 4/3/03 . chapter 1
Words such as 'What the-?' come to mind. You need to work on your writing, at the moment the language is very flat, and your characters state the obvious. Starting in the middle and just writing pure dialogue doesn't help this.