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Thistle 2003-11-21 . chapter 1
That was cute. And I'm glad Race won a bet and Jack broke up with Sarah and Blink and Mush are together. Ok.
Kid Blink 2003-06-17 . chapter 1
Aw! So precious! M, lemony candy from Skittery - delivered just right. :D This inspired me with an idea for one of my RPG's. :) Great stuff! Thanks for the review btw, VERY helful.

-Bec
Eievui 2003-04-09 . chapter 1
Aww. Romance. *feels all warm and fuzzy inside* ^^ I'm off to go read your other stuff~
dhdhd 2003-04-08 . chapter 1
I loved that! Very sweet
Arlene 2003-04-04 . chapter 1
oh! * excitedness at another beautiful and wonderful fic by 24601*

ah!

aw! So touching a subtle way ( not sweet sweet sweet, but just enough to make you sigh and revel in the cuteness of it all. :0)

I really liked the little bit about the candy and how they got an extra minute togther. It really felt like "five minutes", a brief but important encounter that had just the right amount of description.

Race!muse giving you trouble?? no! my sweety would never do that! ( drifts into the lovely world of denial) well as long as I get to read more, i shan't be picky :0)

Great work, yet again! :0)
Crunch 2003-04-04 . chapter 1
Sweet! A nice little romance fic...well written, well plotted, and Skittery makes it all the better. Congrats on a job well done!
*Crunch*
Thumbsucker Snitch 2003-04-03 . chapter 1
LG!Snitch: *has his head to lute's chest* I think I detect life!
Race: Dude, get your head off her chest! I thought you were the innocent one!
LG!Snitch: *blinkblink* What do you mean?
Race: ... never mind. Anyway, I think Lute's starting to wake up. We have her in a semi-concious state!
Jack: NOO~
Slash!Snitch: Dude, shut up! *re-reads the story* *pleasure-shudder* Ah, so good. Yum. I need Skitts snoggage now. *heads upstairs*
Race: ... So yeah. Awesome job! Thanks tons! XD
Lee 2003-04-02 . chapter 1
*1 2 3...AW* I must say, that was absolutely adorable! *gives you thin mints*
...I think I can get used to Snitch/Skittery.

Bad Blink!muse for being an attention **! No cookies for you!
AaronLohrLover24 2003-04-02 . chapter 1
Aw! I LOVED this story! Skittery and Snitch, 2 adorable!! I love slashy stories, and this one was soo sweet! Excellent job! Please keep it up!! ttyl :)
~Sprite~
PS Blink and Mush slashyness = very good stuff ;)
hilby 2003-04-02 . chapter 1
w00t!

One of my favorite things ever is sharing stuff via a boyfriend's mouth. I'm weird. I admit it.

And yay! for Lute revival.

Oh, and here's a present for your Blink!Muse:

**offers forth a candy necklace**

Blink!Muse is to wear it and have Mush!Muse eat it off his neck. Maybe he'll stop being such a pain in the arse.

That is all.

~h!
Shimmerwings 2003-04-02 . chapter 1
AWW! Lute should die more often!

*realizes how bad this sounds and blushes*

I'm liking this Darrol guy. Letting them have time to snog. *nods*

Must have lemon candy now. And yummy Mush/Blink lovin'. If only I wasn't writing other things at the moment. Grar.

Anyway, much cuteness.
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